列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ. Hãy thêm các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về lợi ích của việc lập danh sách khi đi mua sắm.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list before shopping because it helps me save time and money. For example, when I go to the supermarket, I write down everything I need to avoid buying unnecessary items and stick to my budget.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không được truyền đạt hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, sắp xếp ý theo trình tự logic và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Hãy cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể về cách bạn sử dụng danh sách công việc để hoàn thành nhiệm vụ hiệu quả.

示例: Yes, I always make a to-do list before starting work. I prioritize my tasks to ensure I finish important responsibilities on time and complete my work efficiently.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết các ý với nhau bằng liên từ. Hãy giải thích rõ hơn về lý do tại sao một số người không thích lập danh sách, kèm theo ví dụ cụ thể.

示例: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time. They believe they can remember their tasks without writing them down, so they prefer to start work without a list.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp, câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết ý rõ ràng. Hãy giải thích cụ thể lợi ích của việc lập danh sách trên điện thoại và khi nào bạn dùng giấy.

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient. I can set reminders for deadlines and share my to-do list with colleagues and supervisors. However, sometimes I also write lists on paper when I need to quickly jot down ideas.

× Yes, I usually make a list before going shopping because it's happy.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list before going shopping because it makes me happy.

The original sentence uses 'it's happy' which is incorrect because 'happy' is an adjective and cannot be used directly after 'it is' to describe the action. The correct form is 'it makes me happy' to express the cause of happiness.

× Save time and money by planning ahead.

✓ I save time and money by planning ahead.

The original sentence is a fragment without a subject. Adding 'I' makes it a complete sentence with subject and verb.

× I can stick to my budget.

✓ I can stick to my budget.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.

× Attaboy imposed buying which often happened when I shop with our list.

✓ I avoid impulse buying which often happens when I shop without a list.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect word usage ('Attaboy imposed buying'). The correct phrase is 'impulse buying'. Also, 'shop with our list' should be 'shop without a list' to convey the intended meaning.

× For example, when I go to supermarket, I write down everything I need and peace.

✓ For example, when I go to the supermarket, I write down everything I need in peace.

The phrase 'go to supermarket' needs the definite article 'the'. Also, 'and peace' is unclear; likely intended as 'in peace' meaning calmly.

× For my work, before starting working at, always prepare a list to do and prioritize.

✓ For my work, before starting, I always prepare a to-do list and prioritize tasks.

The original sentence is fragmented and awkward. Adding subject 'I' and clarifying 'to-do list' improves clarity and grammar.

× Those responsibility I have to finish that day is have mistake time and.

✓ The responsibilities I have to finish that day must be done on time without mistakes.

'Those responsibility' should be plural 'responsibilities'. The original sentence is also incomplete and unclear; corrected to express intended meaning clearly.

× Complete task efficiently.

✓ I complete tasks efficiently.

The original is a fragment missing subject and plural noun. Adding 'I' and pluralizing 'task' makes it correct.

× First.

✓ First,

'First.' is a fragment; it should be connected to the following sentence with a comma.

× Many people perceive that time consuming they can remember alright responsibility they had to finish that day and they start at work with.

✓ Many people perceive that making lists is time-consuming because they believe they can remember all the responsibilities they have to finish that day and start work without a list.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects grammar and word order.

× I prefer making a list on my phone because I fighted possible and convenient.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because it is possible and convenient.

'fighted' is incorrect past tense; likely intended 'it is' or 'it's'. Corrected to 'it is possible and convenient'.

× I can set notification for the dead light and I can share my To Do List for my colleagues and my leaders.

✓ I can set notifications for the deadline and I can share my To-Do List with my colleagues and my leaders.

'notification' should be plural 'notifications'. 'dead light' is incorrect; correct word is 'deadline'. Prepositions corrected from 'for' to 'with' when sharing.

× However, sometime I also write down the.

✓ However, sometimes I also write down the list.

The original sentence is incomplete and missing plural form 'sometimes' and the object 'list'.