列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and unclear words like 'sobbed' and 'stop'. Try to use clear and correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise.

示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember the items I need to buy. This way, I can shop efficiently without forgetting anything.

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and has incomplete sentences. Avoid unnecessary phrases like 'You need to make a list' which is not relevant here. Use complete sentences and explain your reasons clearly.

示例: I usually don't make a list for my work because my tasks are the same every week, so I remember them easily without writing them down.

建议: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and some unclear phrases. Try to use correct grammar and connect your ideas smoothly using linking words. Also, be more specific in your explanation.

示例: Some people dislike making lists because their daily routines are very regular, so they already know what tasks they need to do without writing them down.

建议: Your answer is fragmented and contains unclear words like 'plants and least'. Use complete sentences and clear vocabulary. Explain your preference with reasons and use linking words for coherence.

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so it reminds me of my plans and tasks easily wherever I go.

× Yeah, most of the time I make a list when I sobbed as it gives me reminding about the items what I need to buy an.

✓ Yeah, most of the time I make a list when I shop as it reminds me about the items that I need to buy.

The word 'sobbed' is incorrect here; the correct past tense verb should be 'shopped' or better to use present tense 'shop' to match 'most of the time'. Also, 'gives me reminding' is incorrect; it should be 'reminds me'. 'What I need to buy an' is incorrect; it should be 'that I need to buy'. Use of correct verb tense and proper sentence structure improves clarity.

× It makes me. Easy to stop.

✓ It makes it easy to shop.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'It makes me. Easy to stop.' is incorrect. The intended meaning is likely 'It makes it easy to shop.' Correct sentence structure and word choice are necessary for clarity.

× I normally don't make a list for my work as I. Work normally same every week and I don't need much time.

✓ I normally don't make a list for my work as I work the same every week and I don't need much time.

The sentence has unnecessary periods and awkward phrasing. 'I. Work normally same every week' should be 'I work the same every week'. Removing unnecessary punctuation and correcting word order improves readability.

× You need to make a list.

✓ I don't need to make a list.

The student is responding about themselves, so 'You need to make a list' is incorrect. It should be 'I don't need to make a list' to reflect their own situation.

× Many people don't like making list because they have there. Daily routine same and every week and every month.

✓ Many people don't like making lists because they have the same daily routine every week and every month.

'Making list' should be 'making lists' (plural). 'There' is incorrect; it should be 'their'. Also, 'daily routine same' should be 'the same daily routine'. Correct use of plural nouns and possessive pronouns is important.

× An they know every item and every work they have to do.

✓ And they know every item and every task they have to do.

'An' should be 'And'. 'Every work' is incorrect; 'every task' or 'all the work' is better. Correct conjunction and noun usage improves sentence correctness.

× And it easier for them without the list.

✓ And it is easier for them without the list.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is'. Complete sentences require a subject and verb for clarity.

× I mostly prefer. Making a list on my phone and notes.

✓ I mostly prefer making a list on my phone using notes.

The phrase 'making a list on my phone and notes' is unclear. It should be 'making a list on my phone using notes'. Also, remove the unnecessary period after 'prefer'.

× As it's always are with me and gives me reminding about my plants and least.

✓ As it's always with me and reminds me about my plans and list.

'It's always are with me' is incorrect; should be 'it's always with me'. 'Gives me reminding' is incorrect; should be 'reminds me'. 'Plants and least' should be 'plans and list'. Correct pronoun use and word choice are necessary.

× And when you're carrying phone it means you are carrying your list and it. Keep you. Reminding an is very easier.

✓ And when you're carrying your phone, it means you are carrying your list, and it keeps reminding you, which is much easier.

The original sentence is fragmented and has incorrect verb forms. 'Keep you reminding an is very easier' is incorrect. Correct sentence structure, verb agreement, and word order improve clarity.