列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is relevant but needs better sentence structure and clarity. Try to avoid run-on sentences and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, correct grammar mistakes like 'it avoid' should be 'it avoids'.

示例: Yes, I always make a list whenever I go shopping because it saves both my time and money. Moreover, it helps me avoid unnecessary expenses and focus on the items I have planned to buy.

建议: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical errors. Use complete sentences and linking words to explain your point clearly. For example, explain how making a list improves efficiency and prevents distractions.

示例: Yes, I make a list of five tasks for my work. I believe that making a list helps me work more efficiently because it allows me to focus on the important tasks of the day. Additionally, it prevents me from getting distracted by unnecessary things.

建议: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer expression and correct grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid incorrect words like 'analyst' instead of 'plans'.

示例: Some people believe in destiny and are afraid of making plans because they think everything will happen according to fate. Therefore, they prefer to go with the flow instead of making lists.

建议: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and some unclear phrases. Use linking words and correct sentence structure to express your preference clearly.

示例: I prefer to make lists on paper rather than on my phone because using a mobile phone often distracts me with notifications. By writing on paper, I avoid distractions and can focus better on my tasks.

× Yes, I always make a list whenever I go for shopping because it saves my time and money both it avoid unnecessary expenses and make me focus on the things which I have decided to board.

✓ Yes, I always make a list whenever I go shopping because it saves my time and money; it avoids unnecessary expenses and helps me focus on the things I have decided to buy.

The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' without 'for'. Also, 'it avoid' should be 'it avoids' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. The sentence also needs proper conjunctions and verb forms for clarity.

× Yes, I do make list of five work.

✓ Yes, I do make a list of five tasks.

The word 'list' needs an article 'a' before it. 'Work' is uncountable, so to refer to multiple tasks, use 'tasks' or 'items'. Hence, 'five work' is incorrect; it should be 'five tasks'.

× According to me, if we make a list of our work, we can more efficiently. Focus on the things which we have to do in a day.

✓ According to me, if we make a list of our work, we can focus more efficiently on the things we have to do in a day.

The sentence is fragmented and incorrectly structured. 'We can more efficiently. Focus' should be combined into one sentence with correct word order: 'we can focus more efficiently'. Also, 'which we have to do in a day' is better as 'we have to do in a day'.

× It also helps us to. Get distracted by unnecessary things in order.

✓ It also helps us not to get distracted by unnecessary things.

The sentence is fragmented and incorrectly punctuated. 'Helps us to. Get distracted' should be 'helps us not to get distracted'. The phrase 'in order' is unnecessary and unclear here.

× Some people believes in destiny and they are afraid of making plannings because they think things will go according to destiny only and whatever is in their fate.

✓ Some people believe in destiny and they are afraid of making plans because they think things will go according to destiny only and whatever is in their fate.

The subject 'people' is plural, so the verb should be 'believe' not 'believes'. Also, 'plannings' is incorrect; the correct plural noun is 'plans'.

× That's why they don't make analyst, they just go with the flow.

✓ That's why they don't make plans; they just go with the flow.

The word 'analyst' is incorrect in this context. The intended word is likely 'plans'. Also, the sentence needs a semicolon or conjunction to connect the two clauses properly.

× Yes, I prefer to make list on paper rather than phone becaused whenever I use mobile phone I get distracted by notifications and many other things.

✓ Yes, I prefer to make a list on paper rather than on my phone because whenever I use my mobile phone, I get distracted by notifications and many other things.

The phrase 'make list on paper rather than phone' is missing the preposition 'on' before 'phone'. Also, 'becaused' is a typo and should be 'because'. Adding 'my' before 'phone' and 'mobile phone' improves clarity.

× Instead of it I make it on paper so that no distraction take place and I can folk I can focus on my things which I have to do.

✓ Instead, I make it on paper so that no distractions take place and I can focus on the things I have to do.

The sentence is awkward and contains errors: 'no distraction take place' should be 'no distractions take place' (plural and subject-verb agreement). 'I can folk I can focus' is incorrect and should be 'I can focus'. 'My things which I have to do' is better as 'the things I have to do'.