列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more clear and natural by correcting grammar and avoiding redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'what I want' and 'what I need', you can say 'it helps me remember the items I need to buy, which saves me time at the supermarket.'

示例: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me remember the items I need to buy. This way, when I arrive at the supermarket, I save time and avoid forgetting anything important.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Try to organize your ideas logically and use correct vocabulary. Explain clearly how making lists helps your work and studies. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect your ideas.

示例: Yes, I always make a list for my work and studies because it helps me organize my tasks and manage my time better. As a high school student, this method improves my focus and helps me complete my work without procrastination.

建议: Improve your answer by using correct grammar and clearer expressions. Use linking words like 'because' and 'as a result' properly. Also, try to be more specific about why some people dislike lists and the consequences.

示例: Personally, I think some people don't like making lists because they believe it wastes time and prefer to do things spontaneously. As a result, they may struggle to complete tasks on time due to lack of discipline.

建议: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and avoiding redundancy. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' correctly. Try to make your sentences more natural and concise.

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is easier to organize my tasks and know what to do next. Also, since I always have my phone with me, it reminds me to complete my tasks quickly.

× Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remind what I need and what I want to buy.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need and what I want to buy.

The verb 'remind' is incorrectly used here. The correct verb is 'remember' because you want to keep information in your mind, not to cause yourself to remember. 'Remind' requires an object to remind someone else.

× So when I arrive at the supermarket I know what I want an it sells me a lot of time so I do not have to think oh what do we need an what stuff I have to buy because I already know it by noting.

✓ So when I arrive at the supermarket, I know what I want and it saves me a lot of time, so I do not have to think about what we need and what stuff I have to buy because I already know it by noting.

The conjunction 'an' is incorrect; it should be 'and'. Also, 'sells me a lot of time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'saves me a lot of time'. Additionally, 'think oh' should be 'think about'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes I always make a Lizzy Wendell. Currently I am a high school Sudan but I do have a clear schedule for my goal and my study an however it does work because it helps me improve my great AN.

✓ Yes, I always make a list. Currently, I am a high school student but I do have a clear schedule for my goals and my study; however, it does work because it helps me improve my grade.

The sentence contains several errors: 'Lizzy Wendell' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'list'. 'Sudan' should be 'student'. 'Great AN' should be 'grade'. Also, the sentence structure and punctuation need correction for clarity.

× It improved my critical thinking and get my work done quickly without procrastinating it.

✓ It improves my critical thinking and helps me get my work done quickly without procrastinating.

The verb tense should be present to match the context. 'Improved' should be 'improves'. Also, 'get' should be 'helps me get' to correctly express the action. 'Procrastinating it' is incorrect; 'procrastinating' does not take an object here.

× Personally, I think people don't like making list because the thing it is such a useless thing to do and it takes a lot of their time, so they prefer to do things whenever they want.

✓ Personally, I think people don't like making lists because it is such a useless thing to do and it takes a lot of their time, so they prefer to do things whenever they want.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity of making lists. Also, 'the thing it is' is redundant; 'it is' suffices.

× As a result they might find it very struggle an cannot finish a simple task because they do not have the disciplines.

✓ As a result, they might find it very difficult and cannot finish a simple task because they do not have discipline.

'Very struggle' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'very difficult'. 'An' should be 'and'. 'Disciplines' should be 'discipline' as an uncountable noun here.

× I prefer make a list on my phone 'cause it is easier for me to organize my tasks an know what I need to do next.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because it is easier for me to organize my tasks and know what I need to do next.

After 'prefer', the gerund form 'making' is required. Also, 'an' should be 'and'. 'Cause' is informal; 'because' is more appropriate in this context.

× However. Since my phone is always with me, so when noting down on the phone, it helped to remind me that I need to do that task and complete the task quickly.

✓ However, since my phone is always with me, when I note things down on the phone, it helps remind me that I need to do that task and complete it quickly.

The sentence has punctuation and structure issues. 'However.' should be 'However,' to connect the sentence properly. 'So' is redundant after 'since'. 'Noting down' should be 'note things down'. 'Helped' should be 'helps' to maintain present tense. 'Remind me that I need to do that task and complete the task quickly' is simplified to avoid repetition.