列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cevabınızda daha doğal ve akıcı ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, cümlenizi doğrudan soruya yanıt verecek şekilde yapılandırmalı ve gereksiz tekrarları önlemelisiniz. Örneğin, alışverişte neden liste yapmadığınızı ve liste yapmanın avantajlarını net ve kısa cümlelerle açıklayabilirsiniz.

示例: I usually don't make a shopping list, but I know it's better to do so because it helps me remember what to buy and avoid unnecessary purchases.

建议: Cümlenizi daha net ve tamamlanmış hale getirmelisiniz. Ayrıca, düşüncelerinizi desteklemek için bağlaçlar kullanarak cevaplarınızı daha tutarlı yapabilirsiniz. Örneğin, yapılacaklar listesi yapmanın nasıl zaman kazandırdığını ve düşünceleri nasıl netleştirdiğini açıklayabilirsiniz.

示例: Yes, I usually make a to-do list for my work because it saves time and helps me organize my thoughts more clearly.

建议: Cevabınızı daha kesin ve akıcı yapmalısınız. Belirsiz ifadelerden kaçının ve nedenleri açıkça belirtin. Ayrıca, cümlenizi mantıklı bağlaçlarla destekleyerek daha tutarlı hale getirin.

示例: Some people might dislike making lists because they prefer to act spontaneously and are not used to organizing their tasks in advance.

建议: Cümlenizi daha doğal ve akıcı hale getirmelisiniz. Ayrıca, tercihlerinizi açıkça belirtip nedenlerini açıklayarak cevabınızı zenginleştirebilirsiniz. Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlelerinizin akışını iyileştirin.

示例: I prefer making lists on paper because it's more tangible, but recently, some apps have become very useful, so some people prefer using their phones.

× So I don't make a list when I. Go to shopping but I I know if I had better make it making a list.

✓ So I don't make a list when I go shopping, but I know I had better make a list.

The sentence has incorrect sentence structure and unnecessary punctuation. 'Go to shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping'. Also, 'make it making a list' is redundant and incorrect. The corrected sentence is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Generally your. I have to clarify what will you take?

✓ Generally, I have to clarify what I will take.

The pronoun 'your' is incorrectly used here and the sentence structure is awkward. It should be 'I have to clarify what I will take' to correctly express the idea.

× Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

✓ Do you make a list for your work? Does it help?

The phrase 'Does it work?' is ambiguous here. 'Does it help?' is more appropriate when referring to the usefulness of making a list for work.

× in generally I make it To Do List because it's saving it saving time and clarify your thoughts.

✓ In general, I make a To-Do List because it saves time and clarifies your thoughts.

'In generally' is incorrect; it should be 'In general'. 'Make it To Do List' is incorrect; it should be 'make a To-Do List'. Also, 'it's saving it saving time' is redundant and incorrect; 'it saves time' is correct. 'Clarify your thoughts' should be 'clarifies your thoughts' to agree with the subject.

× Maybe they they want to do something spontaneously. Maybe they didn't get organised, used to used to something.

✓ Maybe they want to do something spontaneously. Maybe they aren't used to being organized.

'Didn't get organised' is awkward and incorrect in this context. The correct expression is 'aren't used to being organized'. Also, 'used to used to something' is repetitive and incorrect.

× So if you ask me which one do you prefer? Of course I will prefer the make a list on paper, but the recent days some app really they built some really good app in the front.

✓ So if you ask me which one I prefer, of course I prefer to make a list on paper, but recently some apps have been built that are really good. Some people prefer using their phone.

'Which one do you prefer?' should be 'which one I prefer' in reported speech. 'I will prefer the make a list on paper' is incorrect; it should be 'I prefer to make a list on paper'. 'The recent days' is incorrect; 'recently' is correct. The sentence structure is awkward and needs rephrasing for clarity.