列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, and avoid incomplete or fragmented sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

示例: I usually make a shopping list only when I need to prepare a meal that requires many ingredients. This helps me remember everything I need to buy. Otherwise, I shop without a list, especially if I am just buying a few items. For example, if my mother calls me while I am out, I might buy something she asks for without a list.

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question directly. Use linking words to explain your opinion and provide specific reasons or examples. Avoid incomplete sentences and ensure your answer is coherent and concise.

示例: I usually do not make a to-do list for my work. However, I have read and watched many resources that suggest making a list before starting work can increase productivity. People feel satisfied when they check off completed tasks. I might try this method in the future to improve my efficiency.

建议: Your answer is fragmented and unclear. Provide a clear topic sentence and explain your ideas with specific reasons. Use linking words to connect your points logically. Avoid vague expressions like 'so much dreaming' and instead use precise language.

示例: Some people do not like making lists because they find it time-consuming. For example, they may feel that writing lists takes time away from actual work or shopping. Personally, I also avoid making lists because it distracts me from focusing on my tasks.

建议: Your answer is generally clear but contains some incomplete sentences and minor errors. Try to complete your sentences fully and use linking words to explain why you prefer your phone. Keep your answer concise and natural.

示例: I prefer to make my shopping lists on my iPhone's Notes app because it is very user-friendly. This app allows me to add or remove items easily while I am on the go. For example, if I remember something I need to buy, I can quickly update the list on my phone.

× No, I'm not the one who usually makes it less to shop. Biggest.

✓ No, I'm not the one who usually makes a list to shop. The biggest reason is...

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Makes it less to shop' is incorrect and confusing. The correction clarifies the intended meaning by using 'makes a list to shop' and completing the thought. Sentence structure errors occur when sentences are incomplete or improperly formed.

× When I actually shop is where I'm preparing a meal which actually needs all the ingredients to shop.

✓ When I actually shop, it is when I'm preparing a meal that needs all the ingredients.

The original sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. The correction restructures the sentence for clarity and grammatical correctness. Sentence structure errors involve improper arrangement of sentence elements leading to confusion.

× Then I make a list or else if I'm outside, if I get a call from my mother, I.

✓ Then I make a list. Otherwise, if I'm outside and get a call from my mother, I...

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. The correction separates ideas into clearer sentences and completes the thought. Sentence structure errors include incomplete sentences and improper conjunction use.

× Usually I don't make A to do list while I'm working, but I've heard and read a lot of articles and watch a lot of videos around this topic where people used to make A to do list before starting their work and it makes them feel productive at the end of the day while they check off the list included in our.

✓ Usually, I don't make a to-do list while I'm working, but I've heard and read a lot of articles and watched a lot of videos on this topic where people make a to-do list before starting their work, and it makes them feel productive at the end of the day while they check off the items on the list.

The original sentence has incorrect use of the article 'A' instead of 'a' and missing hyphens in 'to-do list'. Also, verb tenses are inconsistent. The correction fixes article usage, verb tenses, and sentence clarity. Article errors involve incorrect use or omission of articles like 'a', 'an', and 'the'.

× I've heard and read a lot of articles and watch a lot of videos around this topic where people used to make A to do list before starting their work and it makes them feel productive at the end of the day while they check off the list included in our.

✓ I've heard and read a lot of articles and watched a lot of videos on this topic where people make a to-do list before starting their work, and it makes them feel productive at the end of the day while they check off the items on the list.

The verb 'watch' should be in past participle 'watched' to agree with 'have heard' and 'have read'. Also, 'used to make' is incorrect here; 'make' is better to indicate habitual action. Verb tense errors occur when verb forms do not match the intended time frame.

× Maybe it's not their cup of tea to make a list for either their shop. Or work.

✓ Maybe it's not their cup of tea to make a list for either their shopping or work.

The original sentences are fragmented and 'shop' is incorrectly used as a noun here. The correction combines the sentences and uses 'shopping' as a noun. Sentence structure errors include sentence fragments and incorrect word forms.

× But for me as an individual. I don't actually like making list because it's too much time consuming and.

✓ But for me as an individual, I don't actually like making lists because it's too time-consuming and...

The original sentences are fragmented and 'making list' should be 'making lists'. Also, 'too much time consuming' is incorrect; 'too time-consuming' is correct. Sentence structure errors include sentence fragments and incorrect adjective forms.

× So much dreaming that it takes a lot of time away from you to concentrate.

✓ It takes a lot of time away from you to concentrate because of so much daydreaming.

The original sentence is unclear and uses 'dreaming' incorrectly. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects word choice. Sentence structure errors involve unclear or incomplete sentences.

× Usually when I go out shopping for preparing a meal, I use my iphone's Notes app which is very useful and user-friendly.

✓ Usually, when I go out shopping to prepare a meal, I use my iPhone's Notes app, which is very useful and user-friendly.

'iphone' should be capitalized as 'iPhone'. Also, 'for preparing a meal' is better expressed as 'to prepare a meal'. The possessive form 'iPhone's' is correct. Incorrect capitalization and preposition use are corrected here.

× Also it has a very nice features which halves need to. Actually go for shopping an on the go.

✓ Also, it has very nice features which help me to actually go shopping on the go.

The original sentence has incorrect quantifier 'a very nice features' (should be 'very nice features' without 'a'), and 'halves need to' is incorrect and unclear. The correction fixes quantifier use and clarifies meaning. Incorrect quantifier use involves wrong use of articles with countable/uncountable nouns.