列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like 'go for shopping' and 'go to do'. Use linking words to improve coherence. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then add supporting details with connectors.

示例: I don't usually make a shopping list myself; however, when my mom asks me to run errands, I request her to provide one so I don't forget anything.

建议: Your answer is clear but can be improved by adding linking words and more specific details. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'not really any list'. Try to explain why you don't need a list and how you manage your tasks.

示例: I don't usually make a list for work because my project manager assigns tasks directly. Therefore, I follow their instructions and manage my work accordingly.

建议: Your answer has good ideas but needs better structure and vocabulary. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and repetition such as 'people, some people'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more specific about reasons.

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they find planning tedious. Moreover, they prefer to work spontaneously rather than following a strict schedule.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to speak clearly and use correct sentence structures. Also, avoid filler words and be specific about your preference with reasons, using linking words for coherence.

示例: I don't often make lists, but when I do, I prefer using paper because I can carry it easily. In contrast, I tend to forget lists on my phone due to many distractions.

× When I go for shopping, I don't usually make a list myself, but if there's some errands that my mom makes me go to do, I usually ask her to give me a list.

✓ When I go shopping, I don't usually make a list myself, but if there are some errands that my mom makes me go to do, I usually ask her to give me a list.

The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' because 'go' is followed by the verb in -ing form without 'for'. Also, 'there's some errands' should be 'there are some errands' to agree in number with the plural noun 'errands'.

× Since I work a corporate job, there's not really any list that I need to make because I usually get work from my project manager and I work according to that.

✓ Since I work a corporate job, there isn't really any list that I need to make because I usually get work from my project manager and I work according to that.

The phrase 'there's not really any list' is incorrect because 'list' is singular and 'any' with a negative sentence requires 'isn't' instead of 'there's'. The correct form is 'there isn't really any list'.

× I don't treat you need make less that much, but when I do, I usually prefer to make your own paper 'cause I feel that I can take the paper anywhere with me.

✓ I don't really need to make lists that much, but when I do, I usually prefer to make them on paper because I feel that I can take the paper anywhere with me.

The original sentence has incorrect pronouns and unclear phrasing. 'I don't treat you need make less that much' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'I don't really need to make lists that much'. Also, 'prefer to make your own paper' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer to make them on paper' referring to lists. This correction improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× And usually in my phone when I make a list, I forget about it because there's so many things are going on in my phone that, uh, I don't really.

✓ And usually, when I make a list on my phone, I forget about it because there are so many things going on in my phone that, uh, I don't really notice it.

The phrase 'in my phone when I make a list' should be 'when I make a list on my phone' to correctly use the preposition. Also, 'there's so many things are going on' is incorrect; it should be 'there are so many things going on'. The sentence was incomplete, so 'I don't really' is completed as 'I don't really notice it' for clarity.