列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cavabınızda təkrarlar və qrammatik səhvlər var. Daha təbii və səlis ifadə üçün cümlələri qısaldın və düzgün qrammatika istifadə edin.

示例: Yes, I always prepare a shopping list beforehand because I tend to forget the items I need. This way, I make sure I don't miss anything important.

建议: Cümlələriniz qarışıq və qrammatik cəhətdən səhvlidir. Cavabınızı daha aydın və məntiqli etmək üçün fikirlərinizi ardıcıl və düzgün ifadə edin.

示例: Not really. When I make a work list, I don't organize it properly and often do tasks randomly, so the list doesn't help me much.

建议: Cümlələrinizdə məntiqi əlaqə və qrammatika zəifdir. Daha aydın və təbii ifadə üçün cümlələri birləşdirin və düzgün qrammatika istifadə edin.

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it tedious, even though lists help them stay organized and remember their daily tasks.

建议: Cümlələrinizdə təkrarlar və qeyri-dəqiqliklər var. Daha təbii və səlis ifadə üçün cümlələri qısaldın və düzgün qrammatika istifadə edin.

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone using organizing apps because I always have my phone with me and can easily mark completed tasks.

× Yes I I always prepare my list before going sure for shopping because I always forget what I really need.

✓ Yes, I always prepare my list before going shopping because I always forget what I really need.

The phrase 'going sure for shopping' is incorrect. The word 'sure' is unnecessary and incorrect here. The correct phrase is 'going shopping'. Also, a comma is needed after 'Yes' for correct punctuation.

× So for not forgetting oh items that I need I always keep my list.

✓ So, to avoid forgetting the items that I need, I always keep my list.

The phrase 'for not forgetting oh items' is incorrect. 'Oh' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'the'. Also, 'for not forgetting' is awkward; 'to avoid forgetting' is the correct infinitive form to express purpose. A comma is needed after 'So'.

× Not really, because when I have to prepare a work list, I don't order that list and I I'm.

✓ Not really, because when I have to prepare a work list, I don't organize that list and I...

The phrase 'I don't order that list' is incorrect; 'order' is not the correct verb here. The intended meaning is likely 'organize'. Also, 'I I'm' is incomplete and should be corrected or removed.

× I make a things random and not to follow the list.

✓ I make things randomly and do not follow the list.

The phrase 'a things' is incorrect because 'things' is plural and should not have the article 'a'. Also, 'make things random' is awkward; 'make things randomly' (adverb) is correct. 'Not to follow' should be 'do not follow' for proper negation.

× So it's it doesn't work for me.

✓ So it doesn't work for me.

The phrase 'it's it doesn't' is redundant. Only 'it doesn't work for me' is correct.

× Because making a list can help people to stay organized and paid their full attention on their important tasks.

✓ Because making a list can help people stay organized and pay full attention to their important tasks.

The phrase 'paid their full attention' is incorrect; it should be 'pay full attention'. Also, 'help people to stay' is better as 'help people stay'. The preposition 'on' after 'attention' should be 'to'.

× So they don't. They don't forget about their daily. Things they need to do.

✓ So they don't forget about their daily tasks they need to do.

The sentence is fragmented and 'daily. Things' is incorrect. 'Daily tasks' is the correct phrase. The sentence should be combined for clarity.

× When I make a list I usually like doing it on my phone in like organizing apps because I don't carry the paper all day with me so I can't like mark the task that I I complete so it's easy making it on my phone.

✓ When I make a list, I usually like doing it on my phone using organizing apps because I don't carry paper all day with me, so I can mark the tasks that I complete. It's easy to make it on my phone.

The phrase 'in like organizing apps' is incorrect; 'using organizing apps' is correct. 'The paper' should be 'paper' without 'the'. 'Can't like mark' is incorrect; it should be 'can mark'. Also, the sentence is long and run-on; it should be broken into clearer parts. 'It's easy making it' should be 'It's easy to make it'.