列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "I like to plan things" and "I usually make a list" which convey similar ideas. Also, correct the phrase "going to shop" to "going shopping" and "makes me easier" to "makes it easier for me." Try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list before going shopping because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time.

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. Use the present tense consistently and improve sentence structure. For example, say "I work five days a week" instead of "I'm working." Also, explain clearly how you use lists on weekends. Use linking words like "however" or "but" to connect ideas logically.

示例: I work five days a week with a fixed schedule, but on weekends, I make a list of tasks to complete, which helps me stay organized and manage my time effectively.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes and hesitations. Avoid filler words like "uhm" and incomplete sentences. Use clear and complete sentences with appropriate vocabulary. For example, say "Some people think making lists is a waste of time because they believe they have a good memory."

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they believe it's a waste of time and trust their memory to remember everything.

建议: Your answer is relevant but contains minor errors and awkward phrasing. For example, say "It's hard to carry paper everywhere" instead of "very hard to carry the paper everywhere." Also, correct "make less" to "make lists." Use linking words like "because" to explain your preference clearly.

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient and I always have it with me, unlike paper which can be easy to lose.

× It makes me easier to remember the things I want to buy.

✓ It makes it easier for me to remember the things I want to buy.

The original sentence is missing the pronoun 'it' after 'makes' and the preposition 'for' before 'me'. The phrase 'makes me easier' is incorrect; the correct structure is 'makes it easier for me'. This correction improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I made list from my work and I do the jobs accordingly.

✓ I made a list for my work and I do the jobs accordingly.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'list', which is necessary for singular countable nouns. Also, 'from my work' is better expressed as 'for my work' to indicate purpose. The verb tense 'made' is correct here as it refers to a past action.

× Most of the people just think that making less as a waste of time.

✓ Most people just think that making lists is a waste of time.

The phrase 'making less' is incorrect; it should be 'making lists'. Also, 'most of the people' is better expressed as 'most people' in general statements. The verb 'is' is needed to complete the clause 'making lists is a waste of time'.

× And most of the people think they have a strong. Mind. And you can see the. Uhm, touch that they can remember the things.

✓ And most people think they have a strong mind, and you can see that they can remember things.

The original sentence has unnecessary periods breaking the sentence and the phrase 'you can see the touch that' is incorrect and unclear. The corrected sentence removes unnecessary punctuation and clarifies the meaning by removing 'touch' and simplifying the sentence structure.

× I prefer to make less in my phone.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone.

The word 'less' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'lists'. Also, the preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to making lists on a device like a phone.