列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly stating your habit and reason. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list before shopping because it helps me manage my budget effectively and focus on buying only the important items.

建议: Your answer has good content but needs clearer structure and grammar correction. Start with a direct answer, then explain with linking words. Also, use correct pronouns and verb forms to sound natural.

示例: Yes, I like to make a list of my work tasks because it helps me manage my time efficiently. As a result, I can complete tasks on schedule without feeling confused.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your idea more clearly by using correct sentence structure and linking words. Also, avoid repetition and be specific.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory and are very punctual and organized, so they can remember tasks without writing them down.

建议: Your answer is quite good but can be improved by making sentences more concise and natural. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct minor grammar errors for better clarity.

示例: When I was a child, I used to make lists on paper because I didn't have a smartphone. However, now I prefer using my phone since it's convenient and I always carry it with me, unlike a pen and paper.

× Last, I would like to make a list before doing any shopping because it helped me to manage my budget and I can through the thing which is important for me from rather than nothing that was not important for me.

✓ Last, I would like to make a list before doing any shopping because it helps me to manage my budget and I can go through the things which are important for me rather than those that are not important.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Helped' should be 'helps' to match the habitual action. Also, 'can through' is incorrect; it should be 'can go through'. 'Thing' should be plural 'things' to match the context. 'From rather than nothing that was not important' is unclear and corrected to 'rather than those that are not important' for clarity and correctness.

× Last, I would like to make a list before doing any shopping because it helped me to manage my budget and I can through the thing which is important for me from rather than nothing that was not important for me.

✓ Last, I would like to make a list before doing any shopping because it helps me to manage my budget and I can go through the things which are important for me rather than those that are not important.

The phrase 'can through the thing' is incorrect because 'through' is a preposition and needs a verb to complete the phrase. The correct verb is 'go through' to indicate reviewing or checking items.

× Last, I would like to make a list before doing any shopping because it helped me to manage my budget and I can through the thing which is important for me from rather than nothing that was not important for me.

✓ Last, I would like to make a list before doing any shopping because it helps me to manage my budget and I can go through the things which are important for me rather than those that are not important.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items. Also, 'nothing that was not important' is incorrect; it should be 'those that are not important' to refer to items.

× I'm very punctual person and I'm like to make a list of her work which I would perform in future because it helped me to manage my temp effectively and efficiently and I do not feel confused about performing a task in time and I can achieve that task in within a given period.

✓ I'm a very punctual person and I like to make a list of my work which I will perform in the future because it helps me to manage my time effectively and efficiently and I do not feel confused about performing a task on time and I can achieve that task within a given period.

'I'm like' is incorrect; it should be 'I like'. 'Her work' is incorrect pronoun usage; it should be 'my work'. 'Would perform in future' is better as 'will perform in the future' to indicate future intention. 'Helped' should be 'helps' to indicate habitual action. 'Temp' is likely a typo for 'time'. 'In time' is the correct phrase for timely completion. 'In within' is redundant; only 'within' is needed.

× I'm very punctual person and I'm like to make a list of her work which I would perform in future because it helped me to manage my temp effectively and efficiently and I do not feel confused about performing a task in time and I can achieve that task in within a given period.

✓ I'm a very punctual person and I like to make a list of my work which I will perform in the future because it helps me to manage my time effectively and efficiently and I do not feel confused about performing a task on time and I can achieve that task within a given period.

'Her work' is incorrect because the speaker is referring to their own work, so 'my work' is correct. Also, 'I'm like' should be 'I like'.

× Some people have some memory as it did not need to make any list of item which they want to buy our perform a task in future. Becaused they were very punctual and very organized person.

✓ Some people have good memory so they do not need to make any list of items which they want to buy or perform a task in the future because they are very punctual and very organized persons.

'Did not need' is past tense but the context is general, so 'do not need' is correct. 'Have some memory' is unclear; 'have good memory' is better. 'Item' should be plural 'items'. 'Our' is a typo for 'or'. 'Becaused' is incorrect; should be 'because'. 'Were' should be 'are' to indicate present habitual state. 'Person' should be plural 'persons' or 'people'.

× Some people have some memory as it did not need to make any list of item which they want to buy our perform a task in future. Becaused they were very punctual and very organized person.

✓ Some people have good memory so they do not need to make any list of items which they want to buy or perform a task in the future because they are very punctual and very organized persons.

The phrase 'in future' should be 'in the future' as the definite article 'the' is required before 'future' in this context.

× Some people have some memory as it did not need to make any list of item which they want to buy our perform a task in future. Becaused they were very punctual and very organized person.

✓ Some people have good memory so they do not need to make any list of items which they want to buy or perform a task in the future because they are very punctual and very organized persons.

'Item' should be plural 'items' because it refers to multiple things. 'Person' should be plural 'persons' or better 'people' because it refers to multiple individuals.

× In my childhood, I would like to make a list of items on paper because I did not have on my smart phone.

✓ In my childhood, I liked to make a list of items on paper because I did not have a smartphone.

'Would like' is incorrect for past habitual action; 'liked' is appropriate. 'Did not have on my smart phone' is incorrect; it should be 'did not have a smartphone'.

× In my childhood, I would like to make a list of items on paper because I did not have on my smart phone.

✓ In my childhood, I liked to make a list of items on paper because I did not have a smartphone.

'Have on my smart phone' is incorrect; 'have a smartphone' is correct. The preposition 'on' is unnecessary here.

× But now I have a smart phone and I'm using my smart phone to make a list because it is very convenient method and I will carry my smartphone everywhere and it is not difficult for me to always find a pen and pencil to write any list.

✓ But now I have a smartphone and I use my smartphone to make a list because it is a very convenient method and I carry my smartphone everywhere and it is not difficult for me to always find a pen and pencil to write any list.

'I'm using' is present continuous but habitual action is better expressed with simple present 'I use'. 'I will carry' is future tense but habitual action should be 'I carry'. 'Any list' is awkward; 'a list' is better.