列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，存在重复和语句不连贯的问题。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更自然的表达方式。

示例: I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I plan what I need beforehand. Then, I just go to the store and buy the items I want.

建议: 回答内容不够清晰，语法错误较多，表达不连贯。建议直接回答问题，使用完整句子，并且逻辑清晰。

示例: Yes, I make lists for my work. When I was studying, I made lists to organize tasks by their deadlines, which helped me finish my work on time.

建议: 表达较为清楚，但存在语法和拼写错误，句子结构不够自然。建议注意语法准确性，使用更地道的表达。

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel pressured to follow them strictly, which can make them anxious about finishing tasks quickly.

建议: 回答内容完整，但有语法错误和表达不够流畅。建议注意句子结构，避免语法错误，使表达更自然。

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient to carry everywhere, and I don't have to worry about losing paper lists. Also, it offers more privacy since others can't see my list physically.

× I said don't make a list when I shop because, uhm, I usually go on the street and and go to buy something when I have some planning.

✓ I said I don't make a list when I shop because, uhm, I usually go on the street and go to buy something when I have some planning.

句中重复使用了连词“and and”，应去掉一个“and”，使句子更通顺。

× And so that after I have some planning, I just go into the shop and get the thing I want to buy an I seldom make a list.

✓ So after I have some planning, I just go into the shop and get the thing I want to buy, and I seldom make a list.

句首不宜用“and so that”，应改为“so”表示因果关系；另外“an”应为“and”，需要修正。

× Because when I was studying, I got money aside for them and I will make a list and to do the thing that the deadline is.

✓ Because when I was studying, I set money aside for them and I would make a list to do the things that had deadlines.

时态不一致，前半句用过去时“was studying”，后半句应使用过去时态“would make”，且“got money aside”表达不准确，应为“set money aside”。

× Coming and. Earlier an after making the list I can finish my work on time.

✓ The deadlines were coming soon. After making the list, I could finish my work on time.

原句结构混乱，断句不当，应拆分为两句并调整时态，使句意清晰。

× I think that some people hate making list because this may bring pressure to them.

✓ I think that some people hate making lists because this may bring pressure to them.

“list”应使用复数形式“lists”，因为泛指多种清单。

× Anstey think that they must follow the list and this is like giving them the pressure that they have to finish them quickly an earlier.

✓ And they think that they must follow the list and this is like giving them pressure to finish it quickly and early.

“Anstey”应为“And they”；“them”指代不明，应改为“it”指代“list”；“an earlier”应为“and early”。

× I will prefer making a list on my phone because I can conveniently bring the list everywhere and I do not have to scare the I lost the paper and I think that there would be more privacy as people cannot see my list physically.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because I can conveniently bring the list everywhere and I do not have to worry about losing the paper. I think that there is more privacy as people cannot see my list physically.

“prefer”后不加“will”；“scare the I lost the paper”表达错误，应为“worry about losing the paper”；“there would be”时态不当，应为“there is”。