列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议加强语法基础，避免用词错误，并且回答应更直接，避免冗余。

示例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I enjoy exploring different stores and finding unexpected items. I prefer to shop spontaneously rather than planning everything in advance.

建议: 回答中语法和词汇使用不准确，句子结构混乱，建议练习句子结构和词汇搭配，表达要简洁明了。

示例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me break down big goals into smaller tasks. This way, I can complete them step by step and feel more organized and relaxed.

建议: 回答中有拼写和语法错误，表达不够流畅，建议注意拼写准确性和句子连贯性。

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous. They like to do things as they come up instead of planning everything in advance.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰，建议加强语法练习，表达时注意句子完整和逻辑清晰。

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more flexible and convenient. I use the built-in memo app to record my goals and check my progress anytime I want.

× I think planning ahead kills the fun of shopping because you had dress has trade for what you need.

✓ I think planning ahead kills the fun of shopping because you have to decide what you need.

句中使用了错误的过去时态“had”，且“dress has trade”是错误的表达，应改为“have to decide”表示必须决定。这里需要用现在时态，因为是在表达一般事实。

× By developing a list, I can breakdown an abstract grand gold in too many specific small goes make it easier for me to implement an accomplished the talks.

✓ By developing a list, I can break down an abstract grand goal into many specific small goals, making it easier for me to implement and accomplish the tasks.

原句中“breakdown”应分开为动词短语“break down”，“gold”应为“goal”，“goes”应为“goals”，“accomplished the talks”表达错误，应为“accomplish the tasks”。这些都是单复数和词形错误。

× In addition, making all this provides a sense of psychology psychological comfort, making me feel more at ease and relaxed.

✓ In addition, making all this provides a sense of psychological comfort, making me feel more at ease and relaxed.

“psychology psychological comfort”中“psychology”是名词，修饰词应为形容词“psychological”。

× Maybe it's because their ideas are more fluid.

✓ Maybe it's because their ideas are more fluid.

此句无明显语法错误，符合上下文，故不修改。

× People usually create To Do List to get a clear picture of daily tasks, while those who don't my prefer spontaneous T just doing things as they come up.

✓ People usually create To Do Lists to get a clear picture of daily tasks, while those who don't may prefer spontaneity, just doing things as they come up.

“my”应为“may”，“T”应为“spontaneity”，且“To Do List”应为复数“To Do Lists”。这些是代词和词汇使用错误。

× Considering flexibility and convenience, I usually make list on my phone.

✓ Considering flexibility and convenience, I usually make a list on my phone.

“make list”缺少冠词，应为“make a list”，这是单复数和冠词使用错误。

× There is a built in memo app on my phone in which I can't directly record the goals and progress of my list and open it to check with whenever I feel a bit confused.

✓ There is a built-in memo app on my phone in which I can directly record the goals and progress of my list and open it to check whenever I feel a bit confused.

“can't”应为“can”，表示能够直接记录；“check with”应为“check”，多余的“with”是介词使用错误。