列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Perbaiki pengucapan dan tata bahasa, serta buat kalimat lebih jelas dan terstruktur. Hindari pengulangan kata dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami dan efektif.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me manage my budget and stay organized.

建议: Perbaiki struktur kalimat agar lebih jelas dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren. Hindari kalimat yang terputus dan gunakan kosakata yang tepat.

示例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me avoid delays and manage my tasks efficiently.

建议: Perjelas alasan dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur. Hindari pengulangan dan kata yang tidak jelas. Gunakan kosakata yang sesuai untuk menjelaskan pendapat.

示例: I think some people dislike making lists because they feel it's too time-consuming or they are too lazy to do it.

建议: Perbaiki pengucapan dan tata bahasa, serta gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami dan jelas. Jelaskan alasan dengan lebih spesifik dan gunakan kosakata yang tepat.

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient and I always carry it with me, unlike paper which feels outdated.

× I I want to pretend my budget on the list and then I love to being organized people then.

✓ I want to present my budget on the list and then I love to be an organized person.

The verb 'pretend' is incorrect in this context; 'present' is appropriate. Also, 'love to being' is incorrect; it should be 'love to be' because after 'love to' the base form of the verb is used, not the '-ing' form. Additionally, 'organized people' should be singular 'an organized person' to match the subject.

× I love to being organized people then. Not organized people, so I make this with.

✓ I love to be an organized person. Not a disorganized person, so I make this list.

The pronoun usage is unclear and incorrect. 'Organized people' should be singular 'an organized person' to match the speaker. The phrase 'so I make this with' is incomplete and unclear; it should specify what is made, e.g., 'so I make this list.'

× Yes, of course I make a list for my works because.

✓ Yes, of course I make a list for my work because.

The word 'works' is incorrect here; 'work' is an uncountable noun when referring to tasks or job duties, so it should be singular 'work.'

× When I don't make the delays of the my works, is it too hectic when I? Going to do my work so it works.

✓ When I don't make a list, my work becomes too hectic when I have to do it, so making a list helps.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Delays of the my works' is incorrect and confusing. The sentence needs restructuring to clearly express that not making a list causes hectic work, and making a list helps.

× It's helped me a lot.

✓ It has helped me a lot.

The present perfect tense requires 'has helped' instead of 'it's helped' (which is a contraction of 'it is helped'). This correctly indicates an action that has relevance to the present.

× I think because some people don't want to make a list because sometimes it's more it's too lazy for people to make a list because he want to spondin.

✓ I think some people don't want to make a list because sometimes they are too lazy to do it.

The pronoun 'he' is incorrect when referring to 'people' (plural); it should be 'they.' Also, 'spondin' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation or error; it is omitted for clarity.

× I prive ertel is on my phone because I think the pepper is too old style for me and then on the phone that I carry everyday, everytime and everywhere.

✓ I prefer to write on my phone because I think paper is too old-fashioned for me, and I carry my phone every day, everywhere.

'Prive ertel' is likely 'prefer to write.' 'Pepper' should be 'paper.' 'Old style' is better expressed as 'old-fashioned.' Prepositions like 'on my phone' and 'every day' are corrected for proper usage.

× So I prefer the right on my cellphone then.

✓ So I prefer to write on my cellphone.

After 'prefer,' the base form with 'to' is used ('prefer to write'), not 'prefer the right.' The phrase 'the right' is incorrect here.