列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“preferred so make a list”应为“prefer to make a list”。建议注意动词时态和句子结构，使表达更流畅自然。

示例: Yes, I prefer to make a list when I shop because I tend to forget things once I get to the supermarket. So, I like to prepare my list all at once before I go.

建议: 回答中表达有些重复且句子结构不够清晰，如“I'm getting a little bit confused”应为“I get a little confused”。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并注意时态一致。

示例: Yes, I like to make a list for my work because I have a lot to do every day. Sometimes I get a little confused, so making a list helps me organize my tasks better.

建议: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不连贯。建议完整表达观点，使用连词连接句子，并避免语法错误。

示例: Some people don't like making lists because it can make them feel stressed. For them, a list is a reminder of many tasks, which creates a sense of responsibility that they might find overwhelming.

建议: 回答中时态使用不当，如“preferred”应为“prefer”，句子断裂影响流畅性。建议使用完整句子并注意时态一致。

示例: I actually prefer to make a list on my phone because I can carry it with me all the time. This way, I can check exactly what I need to do wherever I am.

× Yes, I preferred so make a list when I shop because I tend to forget things when I actually get to the supermarket's so I.

✓ Yes, I prefer to make a list when I shop because I tend to forget things when I actually get to the supermarket, so I.

这里的动词时态错误，'preferred'是过去式，但句子描述的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时'prefer'。另外，'so make a list'应改为不定式'to make a list'。超市的所有格'supermarket's'使用错误，应去掉。

× I like to make a list for my work and it does work for me because every day I have lots of work to do, so sometimes I'm getting a little bit confused.

✓ I like to make a list for my work and it does work for me because every day I have lots of work to do, so sometimes I get a little bit confused.

'I'm getting'使用了现在进行时，但这里描述的是经常发生的状态，应使用一般现在时'get'。

× Maybe because making a list can? Makes him feel so stressed.

✓ Maybe because making a list can make them feel so stressed.

句中'can?'后面不应有问号，且'makes him'主语不明确，改为'them'更符合泛指。

× Making a list for them is just like a reminder. To complete the menu task.

✓ Making a list for them is just like a reminder to complete the main task.

句子断开成两部分，导致结构不完整，应合并为一句完整句子。'menu task'应为'main task'，更符合语境。

× I actually preferred to make a list on my phone because I can carry it. With me all the time.

✓ I actually prefer to make a list on my phone because I can carry it with me all the time.

'preferred'应为一般现在时'prefer'，'carry it. With me'不应断句，应连成一句。