列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store. This helps me remember to buy things for my family and friends. For example, I often include groceries and small gifts on my list.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn không trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và thiếu sự liên kết giữa các ý. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng về việc có làm danh sách cho công việc hay không và giải thích lý do kèm theo ví dụ cụ thể.

示例: No, I don't usually make a list for my work because I prefer to keep tasks in my mind. However, sometimes I write down important deadlines to stay organized.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và không liên quan trực tiếp đến câu hỏi. Bạn nên giải thích lý do tại sao một số người không thích làm danh sách, sử dụng các câu hoàn chỉnh và từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or they prefer to remember things naturally. Also, they might feel that lists limit their flexibility.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý nhưng thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và giải thích lý do tại sao bạn thích làm danh sách trên điện thoại hoặc giấy, kèm theo ví dụ cụ thể và sử dụng từ nối.

示例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is very convenient. I can easily add or remove items and share the list with my family members.

× Yes. When I shopping. Family. My friend I. Oh. I play regular. Make up. For my friend. My family.

✓ Yes. When I go shopping, I make a list for my family and my friends regularly.

The original sentence lacks proper sentence structure and verb forms. 'When I shopping' should be 'When I go shopping' to use the correct verb form. The phrases 'Family. My friend I.' are fragmented and unclear, so they are combined into a coherent sentence. 'I play regular' is incorrect; it should be 'I make a list regularly.' Suggestions: use complete sentences with subject-verb agreement and proper verb forms.

× Does it work? No, because. Aye. I am going to bed. Is this? Make a list. In study.

✓ Does it work? No, because I am going to bed. I don't make a list when I study.

The original response is fragmented and unclear. 'Aye' is likely a filler and should be removed. 'I am going to bed. Is this? Make a list. In study.' are incomplete sentences. The correction forms a coherent response explaining why the list does not work, using proper sentence structure and verb forms.

× I think they they haven't know. Make a list for yourself or. Your other people in. They and they need to run. What TV? Not if we can test.

✓ I think they don't know how to make a list for themselves or for other people. They need to hurry and watch TV. It's not easy to test.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains repeated words and unclear phrases. 'They haven't know' is incorrect; it should be 'they don't know'. The phrases are combined into meaningful sentences. Suggestions: avoid repetition, use correct verb forms, and form complete sentences.

× The boat because when you when you have and have and pepper, I will make a list on my phone on because it's very convenient and in easy to share to my.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very convenient and easy to share with others.

The original sentence is confusing and contains repeated words and unclear phrases like 'have and have and pepper'. The correction simplifies the sentence to express the intended meaning clearly, using proper sentence structure and vocabulary. Suggestions: avoid repetition, use clear vocabulary, and complete sentences.