列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi về từ vựng và cấu trúc câu, ví dụ như sử dụng sai cụm từ "bucket list" thay vì "shopping list". Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn để tránh gây nhầm lẫn.

示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store. This helps me remember what I need and avoid buying unnecessary items, so I can stick to my budget.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và phát âm, ví dụ như "A to do list" nên là "a to-do list" và "Timebound Lee" không rõ nghĩa. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý.

示例: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work and studies. It helps me organize my tasks and manage my time effectively so that I can complete everything on schedule.

建议: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách dùng thành ngữ, ví dụ "play it by ears" nên là "play it by ear". Câu trả lời cũng nên rõ ràng hơn và tránh lặp từ, đồng thời sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn.

示例: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and handle tasks as they come, rather than planning everything in advance.

建议: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác, ví dụ "piece of note" nên là "a piece of paper" và "bucket list" không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này. Câu trả lời cũng nên ngắn gọn và rõ ràng hơn.

示例: I prefer to make lists on paper because my phone often distracts me with notifications, which can interrupt my focus on completing tasks.

× a bucket list is definitely not the thing that I want to forget when I'm going to the groceries

✓ a bucket list is definitely not something that I want to forget when I'm going to the groceries

The phrase 'the thing' is too specific and not appropriate here; 'something' is a better quantifier to express an unspecified item. 'The groceries' is also incorrect; it should be 'the grocery store' or simply 'grocery shopping'. However, since only errors matching the problem list are corrected, only 'the thing' is addressed here.

× when I'm going to the groceries

✓ when I'm going grocery shopping

The phrase 'going to the groceries' is incorrect because 'groceries' refers to items, not a place. The correct expression is 'going grocery shopping' to indicate the activity of buying groceries.

× I can account for what I wanted and what I don't so that I don't over budget myself

✓ I can account for what I want and what I don't so that I don't overbudget myself

The sentence mixes past tense 'wanted' with present tense 'don't'. To maintain consistency, both should be in present tense. Also, 'over budget' should be one word 'overbudget' as a verb.

× I also do need A to do list when I'm doing my work or study

✓ I also do need a to-do list when I'm doing my work or studying

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a'. Also, 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list'. 'Study' as a noun is acceptable, but 'studying' as a gerund fits better here.

× I work can point out what I have to do and the time that I have to finish that to be able to finish the job

✓ It can point out what I have to do and the time that I have to finish it to be able to finish the job

The phrase 'I work' is incorrect; the subject should be 'It' referring to the list. Also, 'that' should be 'it' to refer to the task.

× Timebound Lee

✓ Timeboundly

The adverb form of 'timebound' should be 'timeboundly' to modify the verb properly.

× they don't like do things rationally

✓ they don't like to do things rationally

After 'like', the verb should be in the infinitive form 'to do' or gerund 'doing'. Here, 'to do' fits better.

× They really like to play it by ears

✓ They really like to play it by ear

The correct idiom is 'play it by ear', not 'play it by ears'.

× They like to They prefer doing jobs that seems easy for them rather than what is really crucial for them

✓ They like to, they prefer doing jobs that seem easy for them rather than what is really crucial for them

The sentence is fragmented and has a repeated phrase 'They like to'. Also, 'jobs that seems' should be 'jobs that seem' to agree in number.

× jobs that seems easy for them

✓ jobs that seem easy for them

The plural noun 'jobs' requires the plural verb 'seem'.

× I would prefer to make a list on a piece of paper actually or on a piece of note 'cause phone is very distracted with all those notifications

✓ I would prefer to make a list on a piece of paper actually or on a note because the phone is very distracting with all those notifications

The phrase 'a piece of note' is incorrect; it should be 'a note'. Also, 'phone is very distracted' should be 'phone is very distracting' because the phone causes distraction, not the other way around.

× Although messages they will distract you on the way to completing your bucket list

✓ Although messages will distract you on the way to completing your bucket list

The phrase 'Although messages they will distract you' is incorrect; the pronoun 'they' is unnecessary and causes redundancy.