列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. For example, instead of saying 'makes my shopping more convenient and easy', you can say 'makes shopping more convenient'. Also, watch for small grammar mistakes like 'helps me keep stay' which should be 'helps me stay'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it makes shopping more convenient and helps me avoid impulsive buying. Moreover, it helps me stay within my budget.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and repetition. Try to use linking words like 'because' or 'therefore' to connect your ideas. Also, avoid repeating words like 'the the'. Use more natural phrasing such as 'I usually do not make a list for work because my job is unpredictable, so lists often become irrelevant.'

示例: No, I usually do not make a list for my work because my job is unpredictable and things come up unexpectedly. Therefore, lists often become irrelevant, and I rely on my own judgment to manage tasks.

建议: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and better structured. Avoid repeating similar ideas and use linking words like 'because' and 'so' appropriately. Also, correct small errors like 'an' should be 'and'. Try to give a clearer reason why some people dislike lists.

示例: I think some people dislike making lists because they find them restrictive. For example, in my job, things happen spontaneously, so lists often become irrelevant. Therefore, I rely more on my expertise and experience to handle tasks.

建议: Your answer is understandable but has some awkward phrasing and grammar mistakes. For example, 'I'm at least physically' is unclear. Try to express your preference clearly and use linking words like 'although' to contrast ideas. Also, use correct phrases like 'check it off' instead of 'check it down'.

示例: Although I think making a list on the phone is more convenient, I prefer writing lists on paper because I like the physical act of writing and checking items off when they are done.

× It makes my shopping more convenient and easy and it stops me from impulsive buying and helps me keep stay in my budget.

✓ It makes my shopping more convenient and easy, stops me from impulsive buying, and helps me stay within my budget.

The phrase 'helps me keep stay' is incorrect because two verbs are used consecutively without proper structure. The correct form is 'helps me stay' or 'helps me keep within'. Also, 'keep stay' is redundant. Additionally, 'keep in my budget' should be 'stay within my budget' for correct prepositional use.

× No, I did not make list for my work usually as the nature of my work is there are times when things come up spontaneously or unexpectedly.

✓ No, I do not usually make a list for my work as the nature of my work is such that there are times when things come up spontaneously or unexpectedly.

The sentence lacks the article 'a' before 'list', which is necessary for singular countable nouns. Also, the tense should be present to match the habitual action. The phrase 'as the nature of my work is there are times' is awkward and needs restructuring for clarity.

× No, I did not make list for my work usually as the nature of my work is there are times when things come up spontaneously or unexpectedly.

✓ No, I do not usually make a list for my work as the nature of my work is such that there are times when things come up spontaneously or unexpectedly.

The noun 'list' is singular and countable, so it requires the indefinite article 'a'. Missing the article causes grammatical error.

× So at that point the the list becomes irrelevant.

✓ So, at that point, the list becomes irrelevant.

The sentence has a repeated word 'the the' which is a typographical error. Also, commas are needed after introductory phrases for clarity.

× So I mostly I try to be on point with my own mind and thinking.

✓ So, I mostly try to be on point with my own mind and thinking.

The phrase 'So I mostly I try' has an unnecessary repetition of 'I'. Removing the extra 'I' corrects the sentence structure.

× I think people find it restricting to make a list just like myself as my job nature is more spontaneous and things come up unexpectedly.

✓ I think people find it restricting to make a list, just like me, as my job nature is more spontaneous and things come up unexpectedly.

The reflexive pronoun 'myself' is incorrectly used here. The correct pronoun after 'like' is the object pronoun 'me'.

× So most of the times I try to focus more on my expertise an my experience to tackle all these things.

✓ So most of the time, I try to focus more on my expertise and my experience to tackle all these things.

The phrase 'most of the times' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'most of the time'. Also, 'an' should be 'and'.

× I think making a list on phone is better, but I'm at least physically as I like to write on paper and then check it down afterwards when it's done.

✓ I think making a list on the phone is better, but I prefer physically writing as I like to write on paper and then check it off afterwards when it's done.

The phrase 'on phone' needs the definite article 'the' to become 'on the phone'. 'I'm at least physically' is unclear and likely a misuse; 'I prefer physically writing' is clearer. Also, 'check it down' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'check it off'.