列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response first, then explain your reason clearly and concisely. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like 'an alert choosing' and 'that is a check my eyesight'.

示例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to choose items spontaneously. I enjoy browsing and picking things that catch my eye rather than following a strict list.

建议: Your answer needs clearer structure and grammar. Start with a direct answer, then explain how making lists helps you. Avoid unclear phrases like 'several star detect' and 'make a live'. Use linking words to connect ideas.

示例: Yes, I do make lists for my studies because it helps me organize my tasks. For example, I list my assignments and deadlines so I know what to focus on and when to complete each task.

建议: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer expression and grammar. Use linking words to connect your points and avoid repetition. For example, explain why making lists might feel inconvenient and why some prefer to act immediately.

示例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because it feels inconvenient and time-consuming. They prefer to act immediately without planning, as making a list requires extra thinking and effort.

建议: Your answer is clear but can be more concise and grammatically correct. Use linking words to improve flow and avoid redundancy. For example, explain why the phone is more convenient than paper in a smooth way.

示例: I definitely prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me. Unlike paper lists, which can get lost, digital lists are easy to access anytime and help me stay organized.

× Actually not because I love shopping randomly an alert choosing what I saw and that is a check my eyesight so I saw something attractive so I will take it, but I really make a list because.

✓ Actually not because I love shopping randomly and alertly choosing what I see and that is a check of my eyesight, so if I see something attractive, I will take it, but I don't really make a list.

The sentence has incorrect pronoun usage and unclear phrasing. 'An alert' should be 'and alertly' to correctly use the adverb form. 'Choosing what I saw' should be 'choosing what I see' to maintain present tense consistency. 'That is a check my eyesight' is unclear and corrected to 'that is a check of my eyesight'. Also, 'so I saw something attractive so I will take it' is corrected to 'if I see something attractive, I will take it' for clarity and correct conditional structure.

× but I really make a list because.

✓ but I don't really make a list because.

The sentence is missing the negation 'don't' to correctly express the intended meaning that the speaker does not usually make a list.

× Yes I'm a university student and my major work is study so make a list for work area means make a list for study.

✓ Yes, I'm a university student and my major work is studying, so making a list for work means making a list for study.

The phrase 'my major work is study' is awkward; 'my major work is studying' is more natural. Also, 'make a list for work area means make a list for study' is corrected to 'making a list for work means making a list for study' to improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So like I have a several star detect so I need to make a list and to know what I should do and if I make a live I know which time to do it.

✓ So, I have several tasks to do, so I need to make a list to know what I should do, and if I make a list, I know when to do it.

The phrase 'a several star detect' is incorrect; it should be 'several tasks'. 'Make a live' is a typo and should be 'make a list'. 'Which time to do it' is better expressed as 'when to do it'.

× In my opinion, many body mind making a list it's a little bit.

✓ In my opinion, many people mind making a list; it's a little bit

'Many body' is incorrect; it should be 'many people'. The sentence is incomplete and awkward; it needs to be connected properly.

× Une convenient, maybe a little bit bothering because people want to act directly instead of making a list.

✓ inconvenient, maybe a little bit bothersome because people want to act directly instead of making a list.

'Une convenient' is a misspelling of 'inconvenient'. 'Bothering' should be 'bothersome' to correctly function as an adjective here.

× Yes, I think they're making a list.

✓ Yes, I think making a list

'They're making a list' is unclear and incorrect in this context; it should be 'making a list' as a general statement.

× Might be like you need to think, but I think this most people want to act without thinking.

✓ It might be that you need to think, but I think most people want to act without thinking.

'Might be like you need to think' is incorrect; 'It might be that you need to think' is the correct form. Also, 'this most people' should be 'most people'.

× On my phone, definitely, because if I make a lid on the paper, maybe I will don't know where the paper had gone the next time I want to see the list.

✓ On my phone, definitely, because if I make a list on paper, maybe I won't know where the paper has gone the next time I want to see the list.

'Make a lid' is a typo for 'make a list'. 'I will don't know' is incorrect; it should be 'I won't know'. 'Had gone' should be 'has gone' to match the present perfect tense.

× But if I put it in my phone, my phone is always with me.

✓ But if I put it in my phone, my phone is always with me.

This sentence is correct as is; no correction needed.

× So whenever I wanna take it, I want to say I'll just pick up my phone and scroll it and check the list.

✓ So whenever I want to check it, I'll just pick up my phone, scroll, and check the list.

'Wanna' is informal; 'want to' is preferred. 'Take it' is unclear; 'check it' is more appropriate. 'I want to say' is unnecessary and removed for clarity. 'Scroll it' is simplified to 'scroll'.