列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use complete sentences and linking words to make your response more natural and coherent. For example, instead of 'helps me in reminding the things', say 'helps me remember the things'. Also, avoid sentence fragments like 'Spend less money on unnecessary goods' by connecting it properly.

示例: Yes, I often make a list while shopping because it helps me remember the things I want to buy. Moreover, it helps me spend less money on unnecessary items.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and lacks linking words. Use proper tenses and connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of 'And it also saved my time', say 'It also saves me time'.

示例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because I find it difficult to remember all the details. Additionally, it saves me time when I have a clear list to follow.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete sentences. Avoid repetition and ensure your ideas are fully expressed. Use linking words like 'because' and 'also' to connect your points logically. For example, explain that some people are too busy, while others rely on their good memory.

示例: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they are too busy to spend time on it. Also, others may have a sharp memory that helps them remember everything without needing a list.

建议: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'forget my pants or notebook' and 'So move making list'. Use clearer expressions and correct grammar. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

示例: To be honest, I find it more convenient to make lists on my mobile phone because I always carry it with me. Sometimes, I forget to bring my notebook or paper, so using my phone helps me stay organized.

× Yes, I often make list while shopping because it helps me in reminding the things that I want to buy an moreover it helps me too. Spend less money on unnecessary goods.

✓ Yes, I often make lists while shopping because it helps me in reminding the things that I want to buy and moreover it helps me too. Spend less money on unnecessary goods.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to multiple instances of making a list. Also, 'an' is incorrect before 'moreover'; it should be 'and moreover'. This improves sentence clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I often make list while shopping because it helps me in reminding the things that I want to buy an moreover it helps me too. Spend less money on unnecessary goods.

✓ Yes, I often make lists while shopping because it helps me in reminding the things that I want to buy and moreover it helps me too. It helps me spend less money on unnecessary goods.

The conjunction 'an' is incorrect; it should be 'and'. Also, the sentence 'Spend less money on unnecessary goods.' is a fragment and should be connected properly to the previous sentence for clarity.

× Yes, I always make list for my work as I find it very tough to remember all the details. And it also saved my time when I make the list.

✓ Yes, I always make lists for my work as I find it very tough to remember all the details. And it also saves my time when I make the list.

'List' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to multiple lists made for work. Also, 'saved' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'saves' to match 'I make'.

× And it also saved my time when I make the list.

✓ And it also saves my time when I make the list.

The verb 'saved' is in past tense, but the sentence context is present tense, so it should be 'saves' to maintain tense consistency.

× Then, according to my opinion, I think some people are so busy that they don't have enough time to make list. Moreover, I think they're very. Moreover, I think they're where they're having very sharp memory that can help them to remember all the things.

✓ Then, according to my opinion, I think some people are so busy that they don't have enough time to make lists. Moreover, I think they have very sharp memory that can help them to remember all the things.

'Make list' should be 'make lists' to indicate plural. The sentence 'I think they're very.' is incomplete and unclear, so it is removed. 'They're where they're having' is incorrect; it should be 'they have' to express possession of sharp memory.

× Moreover, I think they're very. Moreover, I think they're where they're having very sharp memory that can help them to remember all the things.

✓ Moreover, I think they have very sharp memory that can help them to remember all the things.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. Combining and correcting them improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× To be honest, I feel more convenient on making list on my mobile phone as I always carry my mobile phone along with me.

✓ To be honest, I feel more convenient making lists on my mobile phone as I always carry my mobile phone along with me.

The phrase 'feel more convenient on making list' is incorrect. The correct form is 'feel more convenient making lists'. Also, 'list' should be plural 'lists'.

× To be honest, I feel more convenient on making list on my mobile phone as I always carry my mobile phone along with me.

✓ To be honest, I feel more convenient making lists on my mobile phone as I always carry my mobile phone along with me.

'List' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to multiple instances of making lists.

× Sometimes I forget my pants or notebook. So move making list on mobile help me to maintain and organize the things well.

✓ Sometimes I forget my pants or notebook. So moving to making lists on mobile helps me to maintain and organize things well.

'So move making list on mobile help me' is incorrect. It should be 'So moving to making lists on mobile helps me' to correct verb form and subject-verb agreement. Also, 'the things' can be simplified to 'things'.