列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve grammar by using present tense consistently. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember exactly what I need to buy. This way, I avoid forgetting important items and save time.

建议: Your answer needs clearer structure and more precise language. Start with a direct response, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid filler phrases and incomplete sentences.

示例: Yes, I always make a list for my work schedule. For example, I write down my daily working hours to ensure I don't miss any shifts, which helps me stay organized.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and logically, using linking words and avoiding vague phrases. Also, be careful with word choice to sound more natural.

示例: I'm not sure why some people dislike making lists, but perhaps they find it unnecessary or prefer to keep things simple. They might also feel that lists add extra pressure to their daily routine.

建议: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Also, try to use more natural expressions.

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me. If I used paper, I might forget it at home, which would make shopping less efficient.

× Yes, I always preferred to make a list while I'm on shopping because it always makes me remember on time what I actually need to buy.

✓ Yes, I always prefer to make a list while I'm shopping because it always helps me remember on time what I actually need to buy.

The use of 'preferred' is incorrect because the sentence refers to a habitual action in the present, so the present tense 'prefer' should be used. Also, 'on shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'shopping' or 'while shopping'. Additionally, 'makes me remember on time' is awkward; 'helps me remember on time' is clearer.

× Yes, I always preferred to make a list while I'm on shopping because it always makes me remember on time what I actually need to buy.

✓ Yes, I always prefer to make a list while I'm shopping because it always helps me remember on time what I actually need to buy.

The phrase 'on shopping' is incorrect. The correct preposition usage is 'while shopping' without 'on'.

× So I think this is a good thing everyone should do because we always forgot what we actually need.

✓ So I think this is a good thing everyone should do because we always forget what we actually need.

The verb 'forgot' is past tense, but the sentence refers to a habitual action, so the present tense 'forget' should be used.

× Yes, I always make a list for my work because like if I talk about my schedule, my hour, so I always try to write my hours on daily basis so I can't miss any shifts.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work because, if I talk about my schedule, my hours, I always try to write my hours on a daily basis so I don't miss any shifts.

The phrase 'on daily basis' is missing the article 'a' and should be 'on a daily basis'. Also, 'can't miss' is better expressed as 'don't miss' to indicate habitual action.

× I always try to write my hours on daily basis so I can't miss any shifts.

✓ I always try to write my hours on a daily basis so I don't miss any shifts.

The phrase 'on daily basis' requires the indefinite article 'a' to be grammatically correct: 'on a daily basis'.

× How it's made, To be honest, I don't know the reason about this thing, but maybe it could be the reason that like people are more lazy and they are not like more.

✓ How it's made, to be honest, I don't know the reason for this, but maybe it could be because people are lazier and they are not as punctual.

The phrase 'people are more lazy' is incorrect; the comparative form 'lazier' should be used. Also, 'reason about this thing' is awkward; 'reason for this' is correct.

× I don't know the reason about this thing, but maybe it could be the reason that like people are more lazy and they are not like more.

✓ I don't know the reason for this, but maybe it could be because people are lazier and they are not as punctual.

The preposition 'about' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'for' when referring to 'reason for something'.

× people are more lazy and they are not like more.

✓ people are lazier and they are not as punctual.

The comparative form of 'lazy' is 'lazier', not 'more lazy'. Also, 'not like more' is unclear; 'not as punctual' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× They want is as it is going.

✓ They want things to stay as they are.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The corrected sentence uses proper conjunction and structure to express the intended meaning.

× I always prefer to make a list on my phone because I think I will sometime miss a paper because I'm not like that kind of person who always keep everything with me.

✓ I always prefer to make a list on my phone because I think I might sometimes forget the paper since I'm not the kind of person who always keeps everything with me.

The phrase 'miss a paper' is incorrect; 'forget the paper' is appropriate. Also, 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Who always keep' should be 'who always keeps' to agree with singular 'person'.

× I'm not like that kind of person who always keep everything with me.

✓ I'm not like that kind of person who always keeps everything with me.

The relative clause refers to 'person' which is singular, so the verb should be 'keeps' not 'keep'.

× I I know like I'll definitely forgot it at home while I go for shopping so I'll prefer to in my phone because it's always with me.

✓ I know I'll definitely forget it at home when I go shopping, so I prefer to keep it on my phone because it's always with me.

'Forgot' is past tense but should be present tense 'forget' after 'will' (future modal). Also, 'while I go for shopping' is better as 'when I go shopping'. The phrase 'prefer to in my phone' is incorrect; 'prefer to keep it on my phone' is correct.