列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by correcting grammar and avoiding redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide specific reasons for your behavior.

示例: I usually don't make a shopping list because I like to explore and buy things spontaneously. However, for special occasions like Eid or weddings, I always prepare a list to make sure I don't forget anything important.

建议: Instead of asking for clarification, try to answer based on your understanding or ask politely if you don't understand. Also, try to give a complete answer with examples or reasons.

示例: I'm not sure if you mean making a list for my work tasks, but usually I do make a to-do list to organize my work. It helps me stay focused and complete my tasks on time.

建议: Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure for better clarity.

示例: Some people, including me, don't like making lists because we prefer to shop spontaneously. However, for special events, I make a list to ensure I spend my money wisely and get the right items.

建议: Try to give a clear and structured answer with linking words. Avoid fragmented sentences and clarify your points about the advantages or disadvantages of each method.

示例: I don't have a strong preference between paper or phone lists. Both are useful, but the important thing is not to lose the list. Using a phone can be safer because it's less likely to get lost.

× No, I'm actually not orderly person, I'm actually randomly person.

✓ No, I'm actually not an orderly person, I'm actually a random person.

The nouns 'person' require an article 'an' before them because they are singular countable nouns. Also, 'randomly' is an adverb, but here an adjective 'random' is needed to describe 'person'. So, 'a random person' is correct.

× I go there, I found find out or discover the things there and if I like it I will buy it.

✓ I go there, I find out or discover the things there and if I like them I will buy them.

The verb 'found' is past tense and incorrect here; the present tense 'find' fits better with 'I go there'. Also, 'things' is plural, so pronouns should be 'them' instead of 'it'.

× I go there, I found find out or discover the things there and if I like it I will buy it.

✓ I go there, I find out or discover the things there and if I like them I will buy them.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to 'things' which is plural, so 'them' is the correct pronoun.

× But if it's special events like Eid or wedding, of course I do a list.

✓ But if it's a special event like Eid or a wedding, of course I make a list.

'Events' is plural but 'it's' is singular; to be consistent, use singular 'a special event'. Also, 'wedding' as a countable noun needs an article 'a'.

× I don't like to do less.

✓ I don't like to make lists.

The phrase 'do less' is incorrect in this context; the intended meaning is 'make lists'. 'Make lists' is the correct collocation.

× I prefer to go there and find out the things if it's not special event like I said.

✓ I prefer to go there and find out the things if it's not a special event like I said.

'Event' is singular and needs the article 'a' to be grammatically correct.

× But if it's if it's special events, of course I want to make sure or ensure. That my money and the things that I want it it's. Good.

✓ But if it's a special event, of course I want to make sure or ensure that my money and the things that I want are good.

'Events' is plural but 'it's' is singular; use singular 'a special event'. Also, 'it it's' is incorrect; the subject 'things' is plural, so use 'are' instead of 'is'.

× Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

✓ Do you make a list for your work? Does it help?

The question 'Does it work?' is ambiguous; 'Does it help?' is more appropriate when referring to making lists for work.

× The important thing that you ensure? But you didn't. Don't lose this paper. Or loose this. You know the list in the phone.

✓ The important thing is to ensure you don't lose this paper or lose the list on the phone.

The sentence structure is fragmented and pronouns are misused. 'Loose' is incorrect spelling; 'lose' is correct. Also, 'in the phone' should be 'on the phone'.