列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh những câu không hoàn chỉnh và sử dụng câu đầy đủ, tránh lặp lại hoặc nói lan man. Hãy tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể, sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list in my head before shopping, especially for dinner ingredients. I find it faster than writing it down, and it helps me remember what I need to buy efficiently.

建议: Bạn cần cải thiện cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Tránh nói những câu bị ngắt quãng và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể về cách bạn sử dụng danh sách công việc.

示例: I don't usually make a to-do list when I have only a few tasks, but when I have many tests, I record all of them on the note app on my phone. This helps me organize my work effectively.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần được diễn đạt rõ ràng và tránh những câu bị ngắt quãng. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, bạn nên cung cấp lý do cụ thể và chi tiết hơn về quan điểm của mình.

示例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they think it wastes time. Instead, they prefer to remember their tasks mentally, which they find faster and more convenient.

建议: Bạn nên nói câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh ngắt quãng không cần thiết. Sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể về lý do bạn thích dùng điện thoại để làm danh sách.

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is always with me, so I can easily check and update my tasks without carrying paper. This method is more convenient and efficient for me.

× In my head rather than writing a list because I think it's faster for me too.

✓ I do it in my head rather than writing a list because I think it's faster for me too.

The original sentence lacks a subject and verb, making it incomplete. Adding 'I do it' completes the sentence structure.

× Check. The items they would like to.

✓ I check the items I would like to buy.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Combining the fragments into a complete sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I don't often make A to do list when I have a few test to do, but when I receive.

✓ I don't often make a to-do list when I have a few tests to do, but when I receive many tests,

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list'. Also, 'test' should be plural 'tests' to agree with 'a few'.

× Many. Test it once I. Will. Rydell. All the tests I need to do on my. Note app on my phone so that I can easily organize.

✓ When I receive many tests, I will record all the tests I need to do on my note app on my phone so that I can easily organize them.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear words ('Rydell'). Reconstructing it into a complete sentence with correct vocabulary improves understanding.

× In my opinion, some people, Joan. Usually Miklas because they think it's a waste of time.

✓ In my opinion, some people usually dislike making lists because they think it's a waste of time.

The original sentence contains unclear words ('Joan', 'Miklas') and lacks proper pronoun usage. Replacing with correct words and pronouns clarifies the meaning.

× Instead of that, they usually. Remember all the things I need to do. In their head.

✓ Instead of that, they usually remember all the things they need to do in their head.

The pronoun 'I' should be 'they' to agree with the subject 'some people'. Also, the sentence fragments are combined for clarity.

× My phone is always be by my site that I can easily check the items I need to buy or the words I need to do without carrying pieces of paper.

✓ My phone is always by my side so that I can easily check the items I need to buy or the tasks I need to do without carrying pieces of paper.

The phrase 'by my site' is incorrect; it should be 'by my side'. Also, 'words I need to do' is incorrect; 'tasks I need to do' is appropriate.

× And it can update it regularly as well.

✓ And I can update it regularly as well.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used as the subject; 'I' should be the subject performing the action of updating.