列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi thiếu tự nhiên và có lỗi phát âm hoặc từ không rõ ràng (ví dụ: 'Dow. Ender. List.'). Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp lại và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn. Hãy cố gắng nói rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

示例: I usually make a shopping list in my head before going to the supermarket because it’s faster and more convenient for me than writing it down.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ vựng chính xác. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: I don’t usually make a list for my daily tasks because they are few, but when I have many assignments, I write a To-Do List to organize my work more easily.

建议: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt chưa tự nhiên. Hãy chú ý sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh ngắt quãng và dùng từ phù hợp hơn để câu trả lời trôi chảy.

示例: Some people don’t like making lists because they think it wastes time and prefer to remember their tasks mentally.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm không rõ, làm giảm tính tự nhiên. Bạn nên nói câu hoàn chỉnh, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lỗi ngắt quãng để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, unlike paper which I might forget to bring.

× Before going to the supermarket, I usually think about the ingredients for dinner, for example, in my head rather than writing Dow. Ender. List. Because I think is faster and more convenient for me.

✓ Before going to the supermarket, I usually think about the ingredients for dinner, for example, in my head rather than writing down a list because I think it is faster and more convenient for me.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'Dow. Ender. List.' which seems to be a mishearing or typo for 'writing down a list'. Also, 'I think is faster' lacks the subject 'it'. The correction fixes these issues to make the sentence grammatically correct and clear.

× To talk about the task I have to do every single day, I think it's not too many to make list, but when I receive a lot of tests for my. Bots.

✓ To talk about the tasks I have to do every single day, I think there are not too many to make a list, but when I receive a lot of tasks for my bots.

The original sentence uses 'task' singular when it should be plural 'tasks' to match 'every single day'. Also, 'make list' should be 'make a list'. 'tests' is likely a mishearing of 'tasks'. The correction addresses these pluralization and article issues.

× I think it's a good idea to write down the To Do List that I can follow it an easy to organize my performance.

✓ I think it's a good idea to write down the To Do List so that I can follow it easily to organize my performance.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'that I can follow it' which is redundant. Also, 'an easy' should be 'easily' to correctly modify the verb. The correction removes redundancy and uses the correct adverb form.

× In my opinion, the reason why people don't like making lists because. They think that making it To Do List is a waste of time.

✓ In my opinion, the reason why people don't like making lists is because they think that making a To Do List is a waste of time.

The original sentence has a sentence fragment 'because.' followed by a new sentence starting with 'They'. The correction combines these into a single sentence with proper structure and article usage.

× Instead of that, they decided to. Remember all the things I need to do in their heads.

✓ Instead of that, they decide to remember all the things they need to do in their heads.

The original sentence incorrectly switches pronouns from 'they' to 'I' which is inconsistent. Also, 'decided' should be present tense 'decide' to match the context. The correction fixes pronoun consistency and tense.

× I would say I prefer. Make a list for my test on my phone because phone is only accompanying with me whenever a wherever I go.

✓ I would say I prefer making a list for my tasks on my phone because my phone is always with me wherever I go.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'prefer. Make' instead of 'prefer making'. Also, 'phone is only accompanying with me' is incorrect; 'my phone is always with me' is the correct expression. 'test' likely should be 'tasks'. The correction addresses verb form, article usage, and idiomatic expression.

× An I rally bring some pieces of paper in my bag.

✓ And I rarely bring some pieces of paper in my bag.

The original sentence has a typo 'An I rally' which should be 'And I rarely'. The correction fixes the typo and maintains pronoun usage.