列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors which affect naturalness. Try to form clear sentences with correct grammar and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain reasons with linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

示例: I usually don't make a shopping list when I go to the grocery store because I prefer to choose items spontaneously. I find it more enjoyable to buy things based on what I feel like at the moment. Also, making a list sometimes confuses me because I tend to overthink what I need.

建议: Your answer is unclear and incomplete, with grammatical mistakes and missing information. Focus on giving a direct answer first, then add supporting details with proper linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences and ensure your ideas are fully expressed.

示例: Yes, I make lists for my work and studies. For example, as a nursing student, I create a timetable to manage my lectures and part-time job effectively. This helps me stay organized and complete my tasks on time.

建议: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer expression and correct grammar. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' properly. Also, avoid repetition and ensure your sentences are complete and coherent.

示例: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it confusing or stressful. Also, some prefer to be spontaneous and feel that lists limit their freedom. For example, my friend avoids making lists because she feels it adds unnecessary pressure.

建议: Your answer is difficult to understand due to grammatical errors and unclear sentences. Try to organize your thoughts clearly: state your preference, explain reasons with linking words, and avoid incomplete sentences. Practice forming simple, coherent sentences.

示例: Actually, I prefer to make lists on my phone because I am quite forgetful. When I write on paper, I often forget where I kept it. Using my phone's notes app is safer and more convenient for me.

× I usually don't make a shopping list when it goes to the grocery store because I preferred tools items spontaneously.

✓ I usually don't make a shopping list when I go to the grocery store because I prefer to choose items spontaneously.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'goes' instead of 'I go' and 'preferred' instead of 'prefer'. The subject 'I' requires the verb 'go' in present tense, and 'prefer' should be in present tense to match the habitual action. Also, 'tools items' is unclear and corrected to 'choose items'.

× I find it more enjoyable to pick things based on but I feel like buying at the moment.

✓ I find it more enjoyable to pick things based on how I feel like buying at the moment.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. Adding 'how' connects the clauses properly, making the sentence grammatically correct and meaningful.

× Also making a list sometimes confuses me a lot because I tend to over think what I need.

✓ Also, making a list sometimes confuses me a lot because I tend to overthink what I need.

A comma is needed after 'Also' to separate the introductory word. 'Over think' should be one word 'overthink' as it is a verb. This improves sentence clarity and correctness.

× Yes, I make a list from my ball, for example when I study.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my tasks, for example when I study.

'Make a list from my ball' is incorrect and unclear. The preposition 'from' is wrongly used. It is corrected to 'make a list for my tasks' to convey the intended meaning.

× And I also do a part time job because I'm a nursing student.

✓ I also do a part-time job because I'm a nursing student.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is informal and unnecessary here. 'Part time' should be hyphenated as 'part-time' when used as an adjective.

× I while attending the lectures I also doing a part time job.

✓ While attending the lectures, I also do a part-time job.

The sentence structure is incorrect. 'I also doing' should be 'I also do' to maintain subject-verb agreement and correct tense. Adding a comma after the introductory phrase improves readability.

× And for the job I make a timetable.

✓ For the job, I make a timetable.

Starting with 'And' is unnecessary. Adding a comma after 'For the job' improves sentence clarity.

× For my studies and also get a.

✓ For my studies, I also make a schedule.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Completing the sentence with 'I also make a schedule' provides clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I think some people don't like making lives because they find it confused or stressful.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they find it confusing or stressful.

'Making lives' is incorrect; it should be 'making lists'. 'Confused' is an adjective describing a person, but here 'confusing' (adjective describing the activity) is appropriate.

× Also some people prefer to be spontaneous and feel that list limit your freedom.

✓ Also, some people prefer to be spontaneous and feel that lists limit their freedom.

A comma is needed after 'Also'. 'List' should be plural 'lists' to agree with 'limit'. 'Your' should be 'their' to match the subject 'some people'.

× For example by friend avoid making less because she will add unnecessary pressure.

✓ For example, my friend avoids making lists because she feels it adds unnecessary pressure.

'By friend' should be 'my friend'. 'Avoid' should be 'avoids' to agree with singular subject. 'Less' should be 'lists'. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and correctness.

× Actually, I'm.

✓ Actually, I do.

The sentence is incomplete. 'I'm' is not appropriate here; 'I do' correctly answers the question about preference.

× I make a list on my phone because I'm very a careless person because when I write on the paper I skipped from a mind that we're I forgot that paper when applied making a list and while writing on my phone in notes.

✓ I make a list on my phone because I'm a very careless person. When I write on paper, I tend to forget it, so making a list on my phone notes is safer for me.

The original sentence is confusing and grammatically incorrect. 'Very a careless' should be 'a very careless'. 'Skipped from a mind' is unclear and corrected to 'tend to forget it'. The sentence is split for clarity.

× I think that is safe for me to making a list becaused informed that is.

✓ I think that it is safer for me to make a list because I am informed that way.

'To making' should be 'to make' (infinitive form). 'Becaused' is incorrect; corrected to 'because'. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness.