列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn.

示例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need to buy and prevents me from forgetting important items.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích rõ ràng cách bạn lập kế hoạch công việc, kèm theo ví dụ cụ thể.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list at the beginning of the day to organize my tasks according to their importance, which helps me stay focused and productive.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng nhưng thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trình bày ý kiến một cách rõ ràng, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích lý do cụ thể hơn.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they are too busy or prefer other methods of planning, such as using digital apps or mental notes.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý chính nhưng thiếu sự mạch lạc và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích rõ ràng lý do bạn thích dùng giấy hơn điện thoại.

示例: I prefer making lists on paper because it's easier for me to follow and I find it difficult to keep track of lists on my phone.

× Absolutely, because it make me eat much my.

✓ Absolutely, because it makes me eat more.

The verb 'make' should be in the third person singular form 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'much my' is incorrect; 'more' is the correct comparative form to express quantity.

× Easy to follow What? Oh, I can buy.

✓ It's easy to follow what I can buy.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs to be restructured into a complete sentence with a subject and verb to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Sure, I usually planning.

✓ Sure, I usually plan.

The verb 'planning' is a gerund or present participle and cannot be used directly after 'usually' without an auxiliary verb. The simple present tense 'plan' is appropriate here.

× For the beginning of the day because it.

✓ I do it at the beginning of the day because it helps me.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb and object. It needs to be completed to form a meaningful sentence.

× A man and I put some of my part in order to in order in terms of important.

✓ I organize my tasks in order of importance.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. It should be simplified and clarified to express the intended meaning clearly.

× Because some people eat.

✓ Because some people are.

The word 'eat' is incorrect in this context; it seems to be a misused word. Possibly, the intended phrase is 'are too busy'. The verb 'are' is needed to form the correct sentence.

× Too busy to make this for every for every day.

✓ They are too busy to make one every day.

The sentence lacks a subject and proper structure. It should be rephrased to include a subject and correct phrasing.

× And sometimes people have another way to plan.

✓ Sometimes, people have other ways to plan.

The phrase 'another way' should be plural 'other ways' to agree with 'people' and to sound natural.

× Indeed, I like making lists on paper rather than phone because it is easy for me to follow an I thought.

✓ Indeed, I like making lists on paper rather than on my phone because it is easy for me to follow and I think so.

The preposition 'on' is missing before 'my phone'. Also, 'an I thought' is incorrect; it should be 'and I think so' to express opinion.

× And I think it's very hard for me to follow when doing zip.

✓ I think it's very hard for me to follow when using apps on my phone.

The phrase 'doing zip' is unclear and ungrammatical. It should be replaced with a clearer expression such as 'using apps'.