列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更准确的词汇。可以先直接回答问题，然后用一两句具体说明理由。

示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list. It helps me remember what I need and prevents me from buying unnecessary items, which makes my shopping more efficient.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和不清晰的表达，建议直接回答问题，避免无关内容，使用连贯的句子表达观点，并具体说明列表如何帮助工作。

示例: Yes, I make lists to organize my work tasks. They help me prioritize and complete tasks on time, which reduces my stress and improves my productivity.

建议: 回答中语法和词汇错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用简单句子，明确表达观点，并用具体例子或原因支持。

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it restricts their freedom. They prefer to make spontaneous decisions rather than follow a fixed plan, which can feel less stressful to them.

建议: 回答中有严重语法错误和表达不清晰，建议先明确表达偏好，然后用简单句说明原因，注意词汇的准确使用。

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. This way, I can easily check and update my list anytime and anywhere.

× Are you gonna make a list?

✓ Are you going to make a list?

“gonna”是口语缩写形式，正式书面语中应使用“going to”。

× When I want to go shopping, at least can ensure that I do not forget something that I need to buy, and at the same time's list can avoid me buying things I don't need.

✓ When I want to go shopping, at least I can ensure that I do not forget something that I need to buy, and at the same time, the list can help me avoid buying things I don't need.

句子缺少主语“I”，且“at the same time's list”结构错误，应改为“at the same time, the list”。

× and at the same time's list can avoid me buying things I don't need.

✓ and at the same time, the list can help me avoid buying things I don't need.

“avoid me buying”结构不正确，应使用“help me avoid”来表达帮助避免的意思。

× A list is like a goal that can improve the efficiency.

✓ A list is like a goal that can improve efficiency.

“the efficiency”中的定冠词“the”不必要，效率作为抽象概念不需要冠词。

× I'm not a 30 year student measuring economicus so I only make the list to organize my tasks.

✓ I'm not a 30-year student studying economics, so I only make lists to organize my tasks.

“30 year”应为复合形容词“30-year”，“measuring economicus”表达错误，应为“studying economics”，“the list”应为复数“lists”。

× At least is like a goal that make me know what to do in the right time clearly.

✓ At least it is like a goal that makes me know what to do at the right time clearly.

缺少主语“it”，动词“make”应为第三人称单数“makes”，“in the right time”应为“at the right time”。

× It can reduce my anxiety and improves efficiency.

✓ It can reduce my anxiety and improve efficiency.

并列动词应保持一致，前面用“reduce”，后面应为“improve”，而非“improves”。

× Well, I think some people don't like to make list becauses least limit is your freedom.

✓ Well, I think some people don't like to make lists because lists limit your freedom.

“becauses”拼写错误，应为“because”，“least limit is your freedom”结构错误，应为“lists limit your freedom”。

× Making list means that you had to do what had been prepared before, which makes some people pressured.

✓ Making lists means that you have to do what has been prepared before, which makes some people feel pressured.

“had to”时态错误，应为现在时“have to”，“had been”应为“has been”，“makes some people pressured”应为“makes some people feel pressured”。

× Some people preferred to spontaneous choices rather than fixed flies.

✓ Some people prefer spontaneous choices rather than fixed plans.

“preferred”时态错误，应为现在时“prefer”，“to spontaneous choices”应为“spontaneous choices”，“fixed flies”应为“fixed plans”。

× Where complied with the phone.

✓ I prefer using the phone.

句子结构混乱，无法理解，应改为表达偏好使用手机的完整句子。

× I like to make list on the phone because nowadays I want take forms wherever they go so I can check my list easily and conveniently.

✓ I like to make lists on the phone because nowadays I want to take notes wherever I go so I can check my list easily and conveniently.

“make list”应为复数“make lists”，“want take forms”缺少不定式“to”，且“forms”用词不当，应为“notes”，“wherever they go”主语错误，应为“I go”。