列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat agar lebih jelas dan alami. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih singkat dan langsung ke poin utama, serta hindari pengulangan kata yang tidak perlu.

示例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized. I enjoy checking tasks off the list as I complete them, which gives me a sense of accomplishment.

建议: Perbaiki kejelasan dan kelancaran kalimat. Gunakan kalimat lengkap dan hindari kesalahan tata bahasa agar jawaban lebih mudah dipahami.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they believe they can remember everything without writing it down.

建议: Perbaiki pengucapan dan tata bahasa, serta buat kalimat yang lebih koheren dan terstruktur dengan baik. Jelaskan alasan preferensi dengan kalimat yang jelas dan lengkap.

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me. Once I create a list, I can easily access it anytime without needing paper.

× Yes, I make a list for my work because it makes me feels like that I can do my job in order and I really enjoy when I make the order so I know when it's done.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work because it makes me feel like I can do my job in order and I really enjoy when I make the order so I know when it's done.

The verb 'feel' should be in base form after 'makes me' because 'makes' is followed by the base form of the verb without 's'. 'Feels' is incorrect here because the subject is 'me', not third person singular.

× For some people, they may think that they can remember. What they're gonna do in they are not. Going to create a lease.

✓ For some people, they may think that they can remember what they're going to do, but they are not. They are going to create a list.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It lacks proper conjunctions and sentence structure. 'Gonna' should be replaced with 'going to' in formal speech. Also, 'lease' is a mishearing or typo for 'list'. The sentence needs to be combined and clarified for meaning.

× I prefer micalis bye. By my phone because I always see my phone in. When I already create. The lease I just can't take it off from my phone and I don't need the paper anymore.

✓ I prefer making a list by my phone because I always have my phone with me. When I have already created the list, I just can't take it off my phone and I don't need paper anymore.

The original sentence has incorrect prepositions and unclear phrases. 'See my phone in' is incorrect; it should be 'have my phone with me'. 'Micalis bye' is likely a mishearing of 'making a list'. 'Take it off from my phone' is incorrect; 'take it off' or 'remove it from my phone' is better. Also, 'the lease' should be 'the list'.