列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Ответы должны быть более связными и логичными. Избегайте разрывов и неполных предложений, используйте связующие слова для плавности речи.

示例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need to buy and saves time.

建议: Старайтесь строить предложения грамматически правильно и ясно выражать мысли. Используйте связки для объяснения причин и результатов.

示例: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me organize tasks and improve my productivity.

建议: Избегайте неполных и бессвязных предложений. Чётко формулируйте причины и используйте подходящую лексику.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and not feel restricted by plans.

建议: Избегайте повторений и неясных выражений. Формулируйте мысли чётко и логично, используя связующие слова.

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so it's more convenient than paper.

× For me it's. More. It's better because I know what I need to buy.

✓ For me, it's better because I know what I need to buy.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper sentence structure. Combining the fragments into a complete sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× And there is. Is route 2 by? What's you really?

✓ And there is a route to buy? What do you really mean?

The original sentence is unclear and fragmented. Reconstructing it into a coherent question improves understanding and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I do list for my. Work.

✓ Yes, I do make a list for my work.

The verb 'do' requires a main verb to complete the sentence. Adding 'make' clarifies the action and corrects the sentence.

× Yes, I think it's work and it's. Is there a study for me when it's we foud at least for my job?

✓ Yes, I think it works and it is useful for me, at least for my job.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Rephrasing it into a complete and coherent sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I think are some people doesn't like making lists because they don't want to.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they don't want to.

The subject 'some people' is plural, so the verb should be 'don't' instead of 'doesn't'. Also, 'are' is unnecessary here.

× Play me something they like home more.

✓ They prefer to stay at home more.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. Rewriting it with a clear subject and verb improves understanding.

× Uh. Choose. It's a.

✓ They choose that.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Completing the sentence provides clarity.

× Yeah, yeah. I prefer to make a list on my phone because my phone with me.

✓ Yes, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I have my phone with me.

The original sentence lacks a verb in the second clause. Adding 'I have' completes the sentence and improves grammar.

× And pepper. Pepper. It's a more harder to don't.

✓ And paper is harder to use.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. Correcting 'pepper' to 'paper' and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammar.