列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan terdapat beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa serta pengucapan yang membuatnya sulit dipahami. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih sederhana dan langsung ke inti, serta gunakan kata penghubung yang tepat untuk memperjelas alasan Anda membuat daftar belanja.

示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me remember everything I need to buy and prevents me from forgetting important items.

建议: Jawaban Anda kurang terstruktur dan ada beberapa kalimat yang tidak lengkap atau tidak jelas. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih teratur dan jelaskan manfaat membuat daftar kerja dengan contoh yang spesifik agar jawaban lebih efektif dan mudah dipahami.

示例: Yes, I often make a to-do list for my work because it helps me prioritize tasks and stay organized. For example, I can focus on urgent jobs first and avoid forgetting important duties.

建议: Jawaban Anda mengandung pengulangan dan kalimat yang kurang jelas. Cobalah untuk menyampaikan alasan dengan kalimat yang lebih singkat dan jelas, serta gunakan kata penghubung untuk menghubungkan ide-ide Anda.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to rely on their memory. They feel confident remembering things without writing them down, but I personally prefer making lists to avoid forgetting important tasks.

建议: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan terdapat kata yang tidak lengkap. Gunakan kalimat yang lengkap dan jelas untuk menjelaskan preferensi Anda, serta berikan alasan yang spesifik dan logis.

示例: I used to make lists on paper, but now I prefer using my smartphone because it's more convenient. I can carry it everywhere and easily add or remove items whenever I need.

× Normally I prefer to make a list to go to before the goodie girl, before the good is sharped because I think it will help me to come.

✓ Normally I prefer to make a list before going to the grocery store, before the goods are spoiled because I think it will help me to come.

The phrase 'before the good is sharped' is incorrect. 'Sharped' is not the correct past participle form here; the intended meaning is likely 'spoiled' or 'expired'. Also, 'to go to before the goodie girl' is unclear and should be 'before going to the grocery store'. The correction uses the correct past participle 'spoiled' and corrects the phrase for clarity.

× To lose any things that I want to buy an I think it's really good to help me remember things that I will buy.

✓ To avoid losing any things that I want to buy and I think it's really good to help me remember things that I will buy.

The phrase 'To lose any things' is incorrect; it should be 'To avoid losing any things' to convey the intended meaning. Also, 'any things' is awkward; 'anything' would be better, but since only corrections from the list are allowed, the focus is on correcting the verb usage. The conjunction 'an' is a typo and corrected to 'and'.

× Yes, of course I do that in an.

✓ Yes, of course I do that often.

The phrase 'do that in an' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'do that often'. The preposition 'in' is misused here and replaced with the adverb 'often' to correct the sentence.

× I think it will help me to desire which one I should do first an it will help me to organize things very well and also add in for so many people that usually they will easily forget something that.

✓ I think it will help me to decide which one I should do first and it will help me to organize things very well and also add in for so many people who usually easily forget something.

The verb 'desire' is incorrect here; it should be 'decide'. Also, 'add in for so many people that usually they will easily forget something that' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. The relative pronoun 'that' is replaced with 'who' to refer to people, and the sentence is restructured for clarity.

× I think I'm some people prefer to remember by their mind, I'm that's why they try to avoid to make a list.

✓ I think some people prefer to remember by their mind, that's why they try to avoid making a list.

The phrase 'I'm some people' is incorrect; 'I'm' is unnecessary and removed. Also, 'avoid to make a list' is incorrect; the correct form is 'avoid making a list' because 'avoid' is followed by a gerund.

× Or sometimes they just used to remember something very clearly in their mind.

✓ Or sometimes they are just used to remembering something very clearly in their mind.

The phrase 'used to remember' is incorrect here. The correct expression is 'used to remembering' to indicate a habitual action. Also, 'are just used to' is added for grammatical correctness.

× But for me personally, I will prepare myself to make a list to avoid something.

✓ But for me personally, I will prepare myself by making a list to avoid forgetting something.

The phrase 'to avoid something' is vague and incomplete. It should specify what is being avoided, such as 'forgetting something'. Also, 'prepare myself to make a list' is better expressed as 'prepare myself by making a list' to indicate the method of preparation.

× I used to make a list on a paper, but nowadays I prefer to make a list on my smart ****.

✓ I used to make a list on paper, but nowadays I prefer to make a list on my smartphone.

The phrase 'on a paper' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'on paper' without an article. Also, 'smart ****' is incomplete and corrected to 'smartphone' for clarity.

× I think it more division than writing on a paper.

✓ I think it is more convenient than writing on paper.

The phrase 'more division' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'more convenient'. Also, 'on a paper' is corrected to 'on paper' as in the previous correction.

× An of course I could bring it anytime I go to some places or just go to store to buy something and that's very visions rather than having a.

✓ And of course I can bring it anytime I go to some places or just go to a store to buy something and that's very convenient rather than having a paper list.

The phrase 'An of course' is corrected to 'And of course'. 'Could' is changed to 'can' to express present ability. 'Go to store' is corrected to 'go to a store'. 'Visions' is incorrect and replaced with 'convenient'. The sentence is completed for clarity.