列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Apni answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar kichu sentence structure improve kora dorkar. Apnar answer e linking words use koren na, jar fole answer ta ekto disjointed mone hoy. Apni chesta korun simple ar clear sentence use korte, ar linking words diye answer ke smoothly connect korte. Apni jodi kichu specific example dite paren, tahole answer aro bhalo hobe.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because I am very organized. For example, I write down the items I need on my phone or on paper. This helps me keep track of what to buy and avoid unnecessary purchases.

建议: Apnar answer e kichu grammar ar vocabulary error ache, ar kichu sentence structure o clear na. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke simple ar shothik vabe gorte, ar linking words use kore answer ke logical banate. Apni kichu specific example dite paren jemon kon dhoroner kajer list banan, jate answer aro bhalo hoy.

示例: Yes, I usually make lists for my work because I often forget tasks. For instance, I write down my daily schedule and important tasks to keep track of what I need to do next. This method works well for me.

建议: Apnar answer e kichu pronunciation ar grammar error ache, ar kichu sentence structure o clear na. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke simple ar shothik vabe gorte, ar linking words use kore answer ke logical banate. Apni kichu specific example dite paren jemon keno lokera list banate pochondo kore na, jate answer aro bhalo hoy.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and do things as they come. For example, they might not want to plan ahead and just handle tasks when they appear. However, I believe making lists helps to prioritize important work.

建议: Apnar answer e onek grammar ar vocabulary error ache, ar kichu sentence incomplete o mone hoy. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke simple ar shothik vabe gorte, ar linking words use kore answer ke logical banate. Apni kichu specific example dite paren jemon keno apni paper prefer koren, jate answer aro bhalo hoy.

示例: I prefer making lists on paper rather than on my phone. This is because when I use my phone, I often change or add items frequently. But with paper, I think carefully before writing, so it helps me stay focused throughout the day.

× Is it usually make a list when I shop?

✓ Do I usually make a list when I shop?

The sentence is a question in the present tense and requires the auxiliary verb 'do' for correct question formation. 'Is it usually make' is incorrect because 'make' is a base verb and 'is' does not fit here. Use 'Do I usually make' to form a proper present tense question.

× Whenever I go to shopping I prefer write it down or take reminder or notes in my phone.

✓ Whenever I go shopping, I prefer to write it down or take reminders or notes on my phone.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping' without 'to'. Also, after 'prefer', the verb should be in the infinitive form 'to write'. 'Take reminder' should be plural 'take reminders' and 'in my phone' should be 'on my phone' as the correct preposition for devices.

× I love doing this because it keeps me track what I need to buy or what I need not to buy.

✓ I love doing this because it helps me keep track of what I need to buy or what I do not need to buy.

The phrase 'keeps me track' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me keep track of'. Also, 'what I need not to buy' is awkward; 'what I do not need to buy' is the correct form. The preposition 'of' is necessary after 'keep track'.

× I usually make list for everything it's works very good for me because I keep forgetting things like what I need to do next hot I persist next or what is the schedule for me today.

✓ I usually make lists for everything; they work very well for me because I keep forgetting things like what I need to do next, how I persist next, or what my schedule is for today.

'Make list' should be plural 'make lists' because 'everything' implies multiple items. 'It's works' is incorrect; it should be 'they work' to agree with plural 'lists'. 'Very good' should be 'very well' as it modifies the verb 'work'. The phrase 'hot I persist next' is unclear and likely a mishearing; assuming 'how I persist next' is intended. Also, 'what is the schedule for me today' should be 'what my schedule is for today' for correct word order.

× So I love keep tracking down all the things I need to do throughout that day in my work so.

✓ So I love keeping track of all the things I need to do throughout the day at work.

'Love keep tracking down' is incorrect; it should be 'love keeping track of'. The preposition 'in my work' is better expressed as 'at work'. Also, 'throughout that day' is better as 'throughout the day' for general reference.

× I think people who want to go with the flow are not willing to make least.

✓ I think people who want to go with the flow are not willing to make lists.

'Make least' is a mispronunciation or typo; the correct word is 'lists' as per context. Pronoun usage is correct but the noun is wrong.

× They don't plan ahead of their time.

✓ They don't plan ahead of time.

The phrase 'ahead of their time' is incorrect in this context. The correct expression is 'ahead of time' meaning in advance. 'Their' is unnecessary here.

× They do what is in front of them or hott didn't need to do right now.

✓ They do what is in front of them or what they need to do right now.

The phrase 'hott didn't need to do' is incorrect and likely a mishearing. Corrected to 'what they need to do'. Pronouns 'they' and 'what' are necessary for clarity.

× I personally prefer paper over phone because in my phone I keep changing the things I want a ***** or adding more items to my phone,

✓ I personally prefer paper over the phone because on my phone I keep changing the things I want or adding more items to it,

'Over phone' should be 'over the phone' with the definite article. 'In my phone' is better as 'on my phone' for devices. The phrase 'I want a *****' is unclear; assuming 'I want' is intended. 'Adding more items to my phone' is acceptable but 'to it' avoids repetition.

× but in paper I need to think twice before entering the. Thanks on my list so I prefer writing down down when I start the day.

✓ but on paper I need to think twice before entering the things on my list, so I prefer writing things down when I start the day.

'In paper' should be 'on paper'. 'Entering the. Thanks' is likely 'entering the things'. 'Thanks on my list' corrected to 'things on my list'. Repetition of 'down down' corrected to single 'down'.