列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise, avoiding redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you make a list, and finish with how it helps you.

示例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need to buy. Moreover, it prevents me from spending too much money. Therefore, I often check my list while shopping to stay on track.

建议: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, organise your answer with a topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words for coherence.

示例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay productive. By listing my tasks, I can focus on reaching my goals efficiently. Whenever I check my list, I know exactly what to do next.

建议: Your answer attempts to explain but is unclear and contains many errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct vocabulary. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details connected by linking words.

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they have a good memory and prefer to remember tasks mentally. Additionally, they might be spontaneous and feel that making lists wastes time.

建议: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing and grammar mistakes. Try to express your preferences clearly and use linking words to explain reasons. Keep your sentences concise and coherent.

示例: It depends on the situation. If my phone battery is low or I forget my phone at home, I prefer to use paper lists. However, when my phone is charged, I use the notes app to keep my lists organised and productive.

× Yes, I make a list when I shop because it keeps me productive to give me remember that I want to buy an that helps me to saving my money more and then.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop because it keeps me productive, helps me remember what I want to buy, and helps me save more money.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'to give me remember' and 'helps me to saving'. The verb 'remember' should be used without 'to give me', and 'saving' should be in the base form 'save' after 'helps me'. Also, the sentence structure is confusing and needs to be simplified for clarity.

× I kept looking at my list when I'm at the Super.

✓ I keep looking at my list when I'm at the supermarket.

The sentence mixes past tense 'kept' with present tense 'I'm'. Since the context is habitual action, present tense 'keep' should be used. Also, 'Super' is incomplete; it should be 'supermarket'.

× It work.

✓ It works.

The subject 'It' is third person singular, so the verb should be 'works' to agree in present tense.

× I always make a list for my work to give me productive and to keep me increase the goals to reaching the goals that I want at my work an so when I look at the nuts I know what I want to do.

✓ I always make a list for my work to keep me productive and to help me increase and reach the goals that I want at my work, so when I look at the notes I know what I want to do.

The phrase 'to give me productive' is incorrect; 'keep me productive' is correct. 'To keep me increase' should be 'to help me increase'. 'To reaching' should be 'to reach'. 'Nuts' is a typo for 'notes'. The sentence structure is also improved for clarity.

× Because they have a high just remember. Hi guys IQ to remember. Only on his or her brain and maybe they just spontaneous person that tink not like making the waste the time.

✓ Because they have a high IQ and prefer to remember things only in their brain, and maybe they are just spontaneous people who think making lists is a waste of time.

The original sentence has unclear pronoun use and incorrect phrases like 'high just remember' and 'Hi guys IQ'. 'His or her brain' is better replaced with 'their brain' for plural 'they'. 'Tink' is a typo for 'think'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Depends. I can do bought up them when my battery phone drain I prefer. Paperin I left my phone at home but when my phone is full I rights I rot at my notes on my iPhone to get my product it.

✓ It depends. I can do both, but when my phone battery drains, I prefer paper. I leave my phone at home, but when my phone is charged, I write and read my notes on my iPhone to stay productive.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'bought up' should be 'both'; 'battery phone drain' should be 'phone battery drains'; 'Paperin' should be 'paper'; 'I left' should be 'I leave'; 'is full' should be 'is charged'; 'I rights I rot at my notes' is unclear and corrected to 'I write and read my notes'; 'get my product it' is corrected to 'stay productive'. Prepositions and verb forms are corrected for clarity and grammar.