列表— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
I have a list but this this is my mind I want to write down.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
I never make list for my work. I knew what to do. And the I can prepare it. I never make list.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
I don't know that maybe they can't remember or maybe they have many things to do or many tasks. So they will make.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
I preferred to make lists on my phone. Is easy to make an easy to read.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
分数: 50.0建议: 回答不够清晰，表达有重复且不自然。建议直接回答是否做购物清单，并简洁说明原因。
示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list in my mind before I go to the store to avoid forgetting anything.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分数: 45.0建议: 回答缺乏连贯性和语法错误，建议使用完整句子并解释不做清单的原因。
示例: No, I don't make lists for my work because I already know my tasks and can prepare them without writing anything down.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分数: 40.0建议: 回答不明确且逻辑混乱，建议明确表达观点并使用连接词使句子连贯。
示例: Some people might dislike making lists because they find it hard to remember everything, or they have too many tasks, which makes list-making overwhelming.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分数: 55.0建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，建议使用正确时态和完整句子说明理由。
示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is easy to create and read them anytime.
语法
× I never make list for my work.
✓ I never make lists for my work.
这里的“list”应该用复数形式“lists”，因为表示多次制作清单的习惯或行为。
× I knew what to do.
✓ I know what to do.
根据上下文，学生描述的是现在的情况，应该用现在时“know”而不是过去时“knew”。
× And the I can prepare it.
✓ And then I can prepare it.
句中“the”应为“then”，表示时间顺序，且时态应为现在时。
× I preferred to make lists on my phone.
✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone.
这里描述的是现在的偏好，应该用现在时“prefer”，而非过去时“preferred”。
× Is easy to make an easy to read.
✓ It is easy to make and easy to read.
句子缺少主语“it”，且“make”和“read”前应有连词“and”连接，时态为现在时。
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