列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question first, then adding a clear supporting detail. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences.

示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store. However, sometimes I forget to bring it when I go to college, and then I have to shop without it.

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical mistakes. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why making a list helps you. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

示例: I don't often make lists for my work, but when I do, they help me stay organized. For example, lists allow me to follow my routine more efficiently and complete tasks on time.

建议: Your answer is confusing and contains many grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly by using simple sentences and linking words. Explain the reasons why some people dislike making lists with specific details.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it too strict or time-consuming. Others may be less disciplined or lazy, so they prefer to work without a list.

建议: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by using better sentence structure and linking words. Also, avoid repetition and be more specific about your preferences.

示例: I usually make lists on my phone because it's convenient in this digital age. However, I also like writing lists on paper since it's a traditional practice in my culture. So, I enjoy using both methods.

× Yeah, is really I make a list for shopping before shopping, but sometimes I forget when I go to college or class, attending class and.

✓ Yeah, I really make a list for shopping before shopping, but sometimes I forget when I go to college or class, attending class.

The original sentence is missing the subject 'I' before 'is really'. The correct form is 'I really make a list'. This is a present tense issue where the subject and verb agreement is incorrect.

× After that I suddenly go to the market for shopping.

✓ After that, I suddenly go to the market for shopping.

A comma is needed after 'After that' to separate the introductory phrase from the main clause, improving sentence clarity and structure.

× Then I found it.

✓ Then I find it.

The context suggests a habitual action, so present tense 'find' is more appropriate than past tense 'found'.

× Actually. I need not frequently make a list for my work, but I gave.

✓ Actually, I do not need to frequently make a list for my work, but I do.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'need not' and 'gave'. The correct modal verb usage is 'do not need to' and 'do' to express frequency and affirmation.

× When I make a list, sometimes it works very good 'cause it's a excellent way of working our routine or our list of work helps us to do our work. Excellently.

✓ When I make a list, sometimes it works very well because it's an excellent way of organizing our routine, and our list of work helps us to do our work excellently.

The adverb 'good' should be 'well' to modify the verb 'works'. 'A excellent' should be 'an excellent' because 'excellent' starts with a vowel sound. Also, sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Not all people like making list because some discipline people maximum time.

✓ Not all people like making lists because some disciplined people most of the time.

'Making list' should be 'making lists' to match plural form. 'Discipline people' should be 'disciplined people'. 'Maximum time' is incorrect; 'most of the time' is the correct phrase.

× Like to listing work, they always want to do any work time to time or with discipline with proper way.

✓ They like listing work; they always want to do any work from time to time or with discipline in a proper way.

'Like to listing' is incorrect; it should be 'like listing'. 'Time to time' should be 'from time to time'. 'With proper way' should be 'in a proper way'.

× But maximum people who are not that disciplined or who are lazy they don't.

✓ But most people who are not that disciplined or who are lazy do not like to make lists.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Maximum people' should be 'most people'. The sentence needs a verb phrase to complete the thought.

× I usually make a list on my phone notebook.

✓ I usually make a list on my phone or notebook.

'Phone notebook' is unclear and likely incorrect. It should be 'phone or notebook' to indicate two separate items.

× Nowadays it's a era of technology, so we all make list in our phone.

✓ Nowadays it's an era of technology, so we all make lists on our phones.

'A era' should be 'an era' because 'era' starts with a vowel sound. 'Make list' should be 'make lists' to match plural. 'In our phone' should be 'on our phones'.

× But I prefer listing in paper because it's a tradition in our culture and in our country.

✓ But I prefer listing on paper because it's a tradition in our culture and in our country.

The correct preposition with 'paper' is 'on', not 'in'.