列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding repetition and grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add a reason using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Keep your answer concise and relevant.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because I tend to forget things easily, so it helps me remember what to buy.

建议: Focus on using correct grammar and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Provide specific details about how making lists helps you at work.

示例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me organise my tasks efficiently and saves time, allowing me to complete more work effectively.

建议: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words like 'because' to explain reasons clearly. Avoid hesitation and repetition to make your answer more natural and effective.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it wastes time and they prefer to remember things spontaneously.

建议: Make your answer clearer and more coherent by avoiding repetition and grammatical mistakes. Use linking words to explain your preference and give specific reasons.

示例: I always prefer to make a list on my phone because typing is faster and it saves time compared to writing on paper.

× Yes, I usually make a list when I whenever I go to shopping I haven't remember things so much, so that's why I make a list for remembering mean error for a for a reminder.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list whenever I go shopping because I don't remember things very well, so that's why I make a list as a reminder.

The sentence has incorrect verb forms and unnecessary words. 'I haven't remember' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't remember' to express present inability. 'Go to shopping' should be 'go shopping' as 'shopping' is used without 'to'. The phrase 'for remembering mean error for a for a reminder' is unclear and redundant; it is corrected to 'as a reminder' for clarity and correctness.

× I usually make a list whenever I do work and it is very convenient for me and save and saving my important time.

✓ I usually make a list whenever I work, and it is very convenient for me and saves my important time.

The phrase 'save and saving' is incorrect; only one verb form is needed. 'Save' should be 'saves' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'do work' is better expressed as 'work' in this context.

× It helps me in so many task to complete so many task.

✓ It helps me complete many tasks.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' because 'many' refers to plural nouns. The phrase is also simplified for clarity and correctness.

× Some people don't like to make a, some making some list becauses they thought this is very unfruitful for them because.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they think it is very unfruitful for them.

The sentence has pronoun errors and awkward phrasing. 'Some making some list' is incorrect; it should be 'making lists'. 'They thought' should be 'they think' to maintain present tense. 'This' is replaced with 'it' to refer correctly to the action of making lists.

× If they have to make our list, then it they have to spend time in that, so that's why they don't want.

✓ If they have to make a list, then they have to spend time on it, so that's why they don't want to.

'Our list' is incorrect; it should be 'a list'. 'It they' is a typo and should be 'they'. 'Spend time in that' should be 'spend time on it' to use the correct preposition and pronoun.

× I was really I always prefer to make a list on my phone bill 'cause if I I made a list, if I make a list on I wanna phone, then only I have were typing some words and it saved my time. More than.

✓ I always prefer to make a list on my phone because if I make a list on my phone, I only have to type some words and it saves me more time.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'on my phone bill' is incorrect; it should be 'on my phone'. 'If I I made a list' is redundant and incorrect tense; corrected to 'if I make a list'. 'I wanna phone' is incorrect; corrected to 'my phone'. 'Then only I have were typing' is incorrect; corrected to 'I only have to type'. 'It saved my time. More than.' is corrected to 'it saves me more time' for clarity and correct tense.