列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答不够连贯，句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议回答时先直接回答问题，然后用一两句具体细节支持，避免无关或重复内容。

示例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to remember what I need. However, sometimes I write down important items to avoid forgetting them.

建议: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议先明确回答问题，然后用具体原因或例子支持，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: I have tried to make lists for my work, but often unexpected tasks come up. Therefore, I don't always follow my lists strictly.

建议: 回答表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱。建议先给出观点，然后用具体原因解释，注意语法和逻辑连贯。

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it restricts their freedom. They might feel pressured to follow the list strictly, which can be stressful.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够自然。建议先直接表达偏好，然后用具体理由支持，避免重复和不必要的词汇。

示例: Although many people use their phones to make lists, I prefer using paper because it's easier for me to check and write notes.

× I'm not a. Well planning persons and.

✓ I'm not a well-planning person.

这里的错误是单复数不一致，'persons' 应该用单数形式 'person'，因为前面有不定冠词 'a'，表示单数。建议将 'persons' 改为 'person'。

× Oh Sir are pretty in.

✓ Oh, sir, are pretty in.

这句话语法不完整且含义不清，可能是表达错误或拼写错误，建议重新组织句子以表达清楚的意思。

× I really enjoyed the fillings for meeting song.

✓ I really enjoyed the feelings from meeting song.

'fillings' 应为 'feelings'，这是拼写错误，且 'for' 应改为 'from' 来表达“来自会议歌曲的感受”。

× On contraire both things, but I will remember the thing that I have to buy.

✓ On the contrary, both things, but I will remember the things that I have to buy.

'On contraire' 应为 'On the contrary'，这是固定短语；'thing' 应为复数 'things'，因为前文提到 'both things'，且句子结构需要复数。

× I have tried to make a list when I working, when I work but.

✓ I have tried to make a list when I am working, when I work, but.

动词 'working' 前缺少助动词 'am'，表示现在进行时，正确结构是 'I am working'。

× Things always. Out of my control and at the end I won't follow the list I make before.

✓ Things are always out of my control, and in the end, I don't follow the list I made before.

缺少动词 'are'，导致句子不完整；'won't' 应改为一般现在时 'don't'，因为描述习惯；'make' 应改为过去式 'made'，因为指过去做的列表。

× As for the person that is. That don't want to be restricts that making less well make them feel pressured and make them feel tight.

✓ As for the person who doesn't want to be restricted, making lists will make them feel pressured and tight.

'person that is' 应为 'person who is'；'don't' 应为 'doesn't'，因为主语是单数；'restricts' 应为过去分词 'restricted'；'making less well' 应为 'making lists'。

× As for my opinion, asked the technology improve.

✓ As for my opinion, as the technology improves,

'asked' 应为 'as'，表示随着；'improve' 应为第三人称单数 'improves'，因为主语是 technology。

× People tend to rely on phone to do a lot of things such as making lists, but actually acts for me.

✓ People tend to rely on phones to do a lot of things such as making lists, but actually as for me,

'phone' 应为复数 'phones'；'acts for me' 应为 'as for me'，表示“对我来说”。

× I still prefer to using the paper because making making paper well using paper will make be easy to check.

✓ I still prefer to use paper because using paper makes it easy to check.

'prefer to using' 应为 'prefer to use'；重复 'making making' 应删除；'make be easy' 应为 'makes it easy'，主语和谓语需一致。