列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm không chính xác, đồng thời sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và nói lan man. Hãy tập trung vào việc trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể hơn.

示例: I didn't use to make a shopping list, but now I find it very helpful because it prevents me from forgetting items and helps me shop more efficiently.

建议: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh ngắt quãng không cần thiết. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng từ vựng chính xác hơn (ví dụ: 'making alerts' nên là 'making lists' hoặc 'to-do lists'). Cố gắng liên kết các ý bằng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: I didn't usually make lists for my work before, but now I find them very useful because they help me stay organized and prioritize tasks to meet deadlines.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi sai. Hãy giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và dùng từ vựng phù hợp.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it takes too much time and they find it boring or unnecessary.

建议: Bạn trả lời khá tốt nhưng nên chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ như thêm mạo từ 'the' trước 'phone'. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể mở rộng câu trả lời bằng cách so sánh ưu điểm của việc dùng điện thoại và giấy để làm danh sách.

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is portable and convenient. Unlike paper lists, I can easily edit and check them anytime.

× Well, in the past I wasn't used to making a list when I go shopping, but now I think it's really helpful for me because I can avoid missing things when a shop and it helps me organize the least really well, I mean. I am in a can.

✓ Well, in the past I wasn't used to making a list when I went shopping, but now I think it's really helpful for me because I can avoid missing things when I shop and it helps me organize the list really well, I mean. I am in a can.

The verb 'go' should be in the past tense 'went' to match the past time frame 'in the past'. Also, 'a shop' should be 'I shop' to correctly use the verb form. 'Least' is a typo and should be 'list'. The phrase 'I am in a can' is unclear and likely an error; however, since it is not a grammar problem type listed, it is left as is.

× Well, in the past I often ignored making alerts for my study, but now I find it really helpful because it can increase my productivity, I can stay organized and for example.

✓ Well, in the past I often ignored making alerts for my study, but now I find it really helpful because it can increase my productivity, I can stay organized, and for example, I can prioritize things to meet the deadlines.

The sentence ends abruptly after 'for example' which should introduce an example clause. Adding 'I can prioritize things to meet the deadlines' completes the thought. The use of 'making alerts' is acceptable as a gerund phrase.

× I would say there are various, but I think the main reason is that they don't have much time. For example, they don't have enough time to just sit down and make a photo the list for a day.

✓ I would say there are various reasons, but I think the main reason is that they don't have much time. For example, they don't have enough time to just sit down and make a proper list for the day.

The phrase 'make a photo the list' is incorrect. It should be 'make a proper list' or simply 'make a list'. Also, 'for a day' is better expressed as 'for the day' to indicate the specific day.

× Also, it would consider race more boring and necessary.

✓ Also, it would be considered more boring and unnecessary.

The phrase 'it would consider race' is incorrect; the passive form 'it would be considered' is appropriate. 'Race' is likely a typo for 'rather'. Also, 'necessary' should be 'unnecessary' to contrast with 'boring' in this context.

× Well, in the past I wasn't used to making a list, but now I love to make a list on my phone because phone is very portable, I can carry it everywhere and can check it anytime I want to.

✓ Well, in the past I wasn't used to making lists, but now I love to make a list on my phone because the phone is very portable, I can carry it everywhere and can check it anytime I want.

'Making a list' in general context is better as 'making lists' to indicate habitual action. Also, 'phone' needs the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific object known to both speaker and listener.