列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to give a clear and direct answer first, then add supporting details. Avoid repeating words and incomplete sentences. Keep your answer concise and natural, within 5 sentences.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping. This helps me remember everything I need and avoid forgetting important items.

建议: Your answer is quite good but try to improve grammar and clarity. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid small mistakes like 'set time' which should be 'save time'.

示例: Yes, I make a list before shopping because it helps me remember what I need. This way, I can avoid buying unnecessary items and save time. Also, making a list helps me stick to my budget.

建议: Your answer is unclear and difficult to understand. Try to give a direct reason why some people dislike making lists, and support it with a simple explanation. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming. Also, they prefer to shop spontaneously without planning everything in advance.

建议: Try to give a clear preference and explain why. Avoid repeating words and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

示例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always carry it with me. This way, I can easily check my list anytime without worrying about forgetting a paper list.

× Yes, this is a interesting question.

✓ Yes, this is an interesting question.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a word starting with a vowel sound like 'interesting'. This is a common article usage rule in English.

× Yes, I make a list when I when I. When I going to shop at least if if I if I before before I completed my list then.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I go shopping, at least if I complete my list beforehand.

The original sentence is fragmented and repetitive. The correct structure uses 'when I go shopping' and 'if I complete my list beforehand' to make a clear and grammatically correct sentence.

× Yes, uh, I make a list. I usually make a list before I go shopping because it's helped me remember everything I need.

✓ Yes, uh, I make a list. I usually make a list before I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need.

The pronoun 'it' refers to 'making a list' and should be followed by the present tense verb 'helps' to match the habitual action.

× because it's helped me remember everything I need.

✓ because it helps me remember everything I need.

The present perfect 'has helped' is incorrect here because the action is habitual, so simple present 'helps' is appropriate.

× This way I can avoid buying unnecessary items and set time.

✓ This way I can avoid buying unnecessary items and save time.

The phrase 'set time' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'save time' when referring to efficiency.

× Making her list also help me stick to my budget.

✓ Making my list also helps me stick to my budget.

The pronoun 'her' is incorrect here; it should be 'my' to refer to the speaker's own list. Also, 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject.

× Is it very necessary for me, That's why.

✓ It is very necessary for me; that's why.

The sentence is fragmented and uses 'Is it' incorrectly. It should be a statement 'It is' and the two parts connected properly.

× Interesting Kristen becauses because as hard and if we if we start in go to the shopping, the time we don't have any end of time to at least our.

✓ Interesting question because if we start shopping late, we don't have enough time to finish our shopping.

The original sentence is unclear and contains repeated words and incorrect conjunctions. The correction clarifies the meaning and uses proper conjunctions.

× Shopping that's why wouldn't sound just for some people making.

✓ That's why making lists doesn't sound appealing to some people.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction provides a clear and grammatically correct sentence.

× I prefer a phone because when I outside the time I don't have any paper but phone my phone always with me so so.

✓ I prefer the phone because when I am outside, I don't have any paper but my phone is always with me.

The article 'a' is incorrect before 'phone' in this context; 'the phone' is appropriate. Also, the sentence needed proper verb forms and articles.

× Of what I thought so so so I I easily swayed. So easily is it instant form?

✓ So, I can easily access it instantly.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction provides a clear and grammatically correct sentence expressing the intended meaning.