列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is clear and relevant but slightly repetitive and a bit lengthy. Try to be more concise and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words to connect your points smoothly. For example, start with a topic sentence, then add supporting details with connectors like 'because' or 'so'.

示例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me avoid forgetting items and prevents me from buying unnecessary things. This way, I save time and money during my shopping trips.

建议: Your answer has some unclear parts and grammatical errors, which affect clarity. Also, avoid irrelevant or confusing words like 'walk' instead of 'work'. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words such as 'however' and 'because' correctly. Be specific about how the list helps or doesn't help you.

示例: Yes, I usually make a weekly list of tasks to complete at work. However, sometimes I forget to check the list, so it doesn't always help me stay organized as I expect.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains confusing phrases like 'entire vehicle' and incomplete thoughts. Focus on giving a clear opinion with specific reasons. Use correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Keep your answer concise and coherent by using linking words like 'because' and 'also'.

示例: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it hard to stick to them and lack discipline. Also, they may feel unsure about planning their whole day in advance, so they prefer to be spontaneous.

建议: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Use linking words like 'because' and 'however' properly to connect ideas. Be specific about why you prefer paper and acknowledge the advantages of phone lists.

示例: I prefer making lists on paper because I can stick them on my board in front of my study table, which reminds me to complete my tasks. However, I also think using a phone list is effective since we use our phones frequently.

× It also helps me to save my time from thinking of what I wanted to buy.

✓ It also helps me to save my time from thinking of what I want to buy.

The sentence mixes past tense 'wanted' with present tense context. Since the action is habitual or general, present tense 'want' should be used to maintain consistency.

× Yes, I always make a list before starting my walk.

✓ Yes, I always make a list before starting my work.

The word 'walk' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'work' to match the intended meaning of tasks to complete. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar error but is corrected here for clarity.

× However, there are times that I don't really use the list as much and it does not walk up to my expectations.

✓ However, there are times that I don't really use the list as much and it does not live up to my expectations.

The phrase 'walk up to my expectations' is incorrect; the correct idiom is 'live up to my expectations'. This is an incorrect use of verb and phrase.

× This is mainly because at times I forget about referring to it and do not fall.

✓ This is mainly because at times I forget to refer to it and do not follow it.

The phrase 'forget about referring to it' is awkward; 'forget to refer to it' is correct. Also, 'do not fall' is incorrect; it should be 'do not follow' to convey the intended meaning.

× In my opinion, the reason by all people don't like to make lists is because they don't follow it and don't have that discipline.

✓ In my opinion, the reason why some people don't like to make lists is because they don't follow them and don't have that discipline.

'Reason by all people' is incorrect; it should be 'reason why some people'. Also, 'don't follow it' should be 'don't follow them' because 'lists' is plural.

× It is also because they cannot decide at one particular period of time what they aim to do in their entire vehicle, let's say even their entire day.

✓ It is also because they cannot decide at one particular period of time what they aim to do in their entire schedule, let's say even their entire day.

The word 'vehicle' is incorrect in this context; 'schedule' fits the meaning better. This is a vocabulary misuse corrected for clarity.

× And I think it varies from person to person. And it is not ***** tree to make a list, it depends from the type of.

✓ And I think it varies from person to person. And it is not easy to make a list; it depends on the type of person.

The sentence is incomplete and contains unclear words ('***** tree'). It is corrected to a complete, meaningful sentence with proper conjunction and preposition usage.

× I usually prefer to make a list on paper.

✓ I usually prefer to make a list on paper.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× This is because I attached this paper on my board right in front of my study table.

✓ This is because I attach this paper to my board right in front of my study table.

The verb tense is corrected to present simple 'attach' to match habitual action. Also, the preposition 'on' is changed to 'to' because we attach something to a surface.

× This helps me to remember whether or not I've completed my task at all times whenever I sit on my table.

✓ This helps me to remember whether or not I've completed my tasks at all times whenever I sit at my table.

'Sit on my table' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'sit at my table'. Also, 'task' is changed to plural 'tasks' to match context.

× However, I feel like making or list on the phone would also be affective since we use our phones almost all the time.

✓ However, I feel like making a list on the phone would also be effective since we use our phones almost all the time.

The phrase 'making or list' is a typo corrected to 'making a list'. The word 'affective' is incorrect; the correct word is 'effective'.