列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ như 'shot' thay vì 'shop' và cấu trúc câu chưa tự nhiên. Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và chính xác hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm sai. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các từ vựng phù hợp và câu có cấu trúc đúng.

示例: No, I don't usually make a list when I go shopping because I can remember what I need to buy. I find it easier to recall the items in my head rather than writing them down.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng cách diễn đạt còn lủng củng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh các lỗi như 'ya ha site done before' và dùng các liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

示例: Yes, I make a list for my work, and it is very useful because it helps me keep track of tasks I haven't completed yet and plan what to do next.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn còn ngắn và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như thiếu chủ ngữ và động từ phù hợp. Bạn nên mở rộng câu trả lời với lý do cụ thể hơn và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp.

示例: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to remember things naturally.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn bị chia nhỏ thành nhiều câu ngắn không liên kết và có lỗi ngữ pháp như 'foam' thay vì 'phone'. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng hơn, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết các ý với nhau.

示例: I usually make lists in my head rather than on paper or my phone because I try to remember everything without always relying on a list.

× No, I don't really make a list when I shot because I have already remember it in my head, so when I go to the supermarket I remember anything I bought it.

✓ No, I don't really make a list when I shop because I have already remembered it in my head, so when I go to the supermarket I remember everything I want to buy.

The word 'shot' is a typo and should be 'shop' to match the context. 'Have already remember' is incorrect; the past participle 'remembered' is needed after 'have already'. 'Remember anything I bought it' is incorrect; it should be 'remember everything I want to buy' to express intention and correct object usage.

× No, I don't really make a list when I shot because I have already remember it in my head, so when I go to the supermarket I remember anything I bought it.

✓ No, I don't really make a list when I shop because I have already remembered it in my head, so when I go to the supermarket I remember everything I want to buy.

After 'have already', the verb should be in past participle form 'remembered' to form the present perfect tense correctly.

× No, I don't really make a list when I shot because I have already remember it in my head, so when I go to the supermarket I remember anything I bought it.

✓ No, I don't really make a list when I shop because I have already remembered it in my head, so when I go to the supermarket I remember everything I want to buy.

The pronoun 'it' is unnecessary and incorrect after 'bought'; the sentence should use 'everything I want to buy' to clearly express the intended meaning.

× Yes. And make a list for my work and it is very useful for me because it shows me what work I haven't done, what work is next, what ya ha site done before.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work and it is very useful for me because it shows me what work I haven't done, what work is next, and what I have done before.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear words like 'ya ha site'. It needs to be combined properly and corrected to 'I have done' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes. And make a list for my work and it is very useful for me because it shows me what work I haven't done, what work is next, what ya ha site done before.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work and it is very useful for me because it shows me what work I haven't done, what work is next, and what I have done before.

The phrase 'ya ha site' is incorrect and should be replaced with the correct pronoun phrase 'I have' to maintain proper subject reference.

× I think they don't like making list is because they found it. A waste of time.

✓ I think they don't like making lists because they find it a waste of time.

'List' should be plural 'lists' to match the general meaning. 'Found' should be present tense 'find' to agree with 'don't like'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× I think they don't like making list is because they found it. A waste of time.

✓ I think they don't like making lists because they find it a waste of time.

The original sentence is fragmented and incorrectly structured. Removing 'is' and combining the sentence properly improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I usually make a list. In my head. More than on the paper or foam. Because I still trying to remember everything, not always to use the list.

✓ I usually make a list in my head more than on paper or my phone because I am still trying to remember everything and don't always use the list.

Prepositions 'on the paper or foam' are incorrect; it should be 'on paper or my phone'. The sentence fragments are combined for fluency. 'Still trying' needs auxiliary verb 'am'. 'Not always to use' is corrected to 'don't always use' for proper verb form.