列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to answer the question directly and clearly. Use correct grammar and avoid redundancy. For example, start with a clear topic sentence like 'Yes, I usually make a list when I shop.' Then add specific reasons using linking words such as 'because' or 'so'.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me find items more easily. Also, it allows me to finish shopping quickly and avoid forgetting anything.

建议: Answer directly and clearly. Use correct verb forms and avoid hesitation. Use linking words to explain how making lists helps your work.

示例: Yes, I make lists for my work, and they help me stay organized. For example, in my dental job, lists ensure I complete all tasks efficiently and accurately.

建议: Focus on clear and grammatically correct sentences. Use linking words like 'because' and 'also' to connect ideas. Avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it difficult. Also, they may not know how to create an effective list or understand its benefits.

建议: Answer clearly and use correct vocabulary. Compare both methods using linking words like 'but' or 'however'. Avoid unclear phrases and grammar mistakes.

示例: I prefer making lists on paper because I can find them quickly. However, sometimes I use my phone since it's more convenient and easier to edit.

× Although I don't go to shop alone, are you prepared to make a list?

✓ Although I don't go shopping alone, I am prepared to make a list.

The phrase 'go to shop' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' when referring to the activity. Also, the question 'are you prepared to make a list?' does not fit the context and should be changed to a statement matching the intended meaning.

× When I go to shop with my family, it's helped me to find the things easier.

✓ When I go shopping with my family, it helps me to find things more easily.

The verb 'helped' is incorrectly used in the present context; it should be 'helps' to match the present tense. Also, 'to find the things easier' should be 'to find things more easily' to use the correct adverb form.

× Furthermore, it help me to find the finish shop easy and fast Lee.

✓ Furthermore, it helps me to find the finished shop easily and fast.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the third person singular subject 'it'. 'Finish shop' should be 'finished shop' or better 'final shop', and 'easy and fast Lee' should be 'easily and fast' with correct adverb forms.

× Actually that.

✓ Actually, that's true.

The sentence 'Actually that.' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'that's true' completes the thought and makes the sentence meaningful.

× Uh, actually, as I doing a list for my job, it's helped me to doing a great job.

✓ Uh, actually, as I make a list for my job, it helps me to do a great job.

The phrase 'as I doing' is incorrect; it should be 'as I make' or 'when I make'. Also, 'it's helped me to doing' is incorrect; it should be 'it helps me to do' to use the correct verb form after 'helps'.

× Furthermore, it's helped me to. What are you doing the job?

✓ Furthermore, it helps me with my job.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'It's helped me to.' is incomplete, and 'What are you doing the job?' is incorrect. The correction provides a clear and grammatically correct sentence.

× Actually it's helped me to doing what I do in dental.

✓ Actually, it helps me with what I do in dental work.

The phrase 'helped me to doing' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me with' or 'helps me to do'. Also, 'in dental' is incomplete; 'in dental work' is more appropriate.

× Actually, people don't make a legs at least a they believe that.

✓ Actually, people don't make lists because they believe that.

'Make a legs' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make lists'. Also, the sentence structure is confusing and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× Furthermore. They don't know how to make a list.

✓ Furthermore, they don't know how to make a list.

A period is incorrectly used instead of a comma after 'Furthermore'. It should be 'Furthermore,' to connect the sentence properly.

× Moreover, Moreover, they don't know how the list it's work.

✓ Moreover, they don't know how the list works.

The phrase 'how the list it's work' is incorrect. It should be 'how the list works' to use the correct verb form and remove the unnecessary pronoun 'it's'.

× Actually I should make a list in the Babel, it's help me to found it faster for them or it's help Maine to forward I think faster.

✓ Actually, I should make a list in the Bible; it helps me to find it faster, or it helps me to work faster.

'In the Babel' is unclear; possibly 'in the Bible' or 'in the notebook' is intended. 'Help me to found' should be 'help me to find'. 'Help Maine to forward I think faster' is unclear and corrected to 'helps me to work faster' for clarity.

× While sometime I should to do my list in the phone, it's more easier than the paper.

✓ Sometimes I should make my list on the phone; it's easier than on paper.

'Should to do' is incorrect; it should be 'should make'. 'More easier' is incorrect; 'easier' is sufficient. Also, 'in the phone' should be 'on the phone' and 'than the paper' should be 'than on paper'.

× Actually that.

✓ Actually, that's true.

The sentence 'Actually that.' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'that's true' completes the thought and makes the sentence meaningful.