列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Сизнинг жавобингизда грамматик хатолар ва тушунарсиз иборалар бор. Саволга тўғридан-тўғри жавоб беришингиз керак ва сўзларни тўғри шаклда ишлатишингиз лозим. Шунингдек, жавобингизни қисқа ва аниқ қилиб, ортиқча сўзлардан қочинг.

示例: No, I usually don't make a shopping list because I have a good memory. I prefer to remember what I need rather than writing it down.

建议: Жавобингизда мавзудан четга чиқиш ва тушунарсиз гаплар бор. Саволга аниқ ва тўғри жавоб беринг, керак бўлса, қисқа ва аниқ маълумотлар билан қўллаб-қувватланг.

示例: No, I don't make a list for work because I am a student and I don't have a job currently.

建议: Жавобингизда грамматик хатолар ва тушунарсиз иборалар бор. Саволга тўғридан-тўғри жавоб беринг ва фикрингизни аниқ ва тўғри ифодалашга ҳаракат қилинг.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to rely on their memory, even if it is not very good.

建议: Жавобингизда тушунарсизлик ва грамматик хатолар бор. Саволга аниқ жавоб беринг ва фикрингизни қисқа ва аниқ қилиб ифодалашга ҳаракат қилинг.

示例: I usually don't make lists, but when I do, I prefer to write them on paper, especially for important things like passwords.

× When I shopping I don't do at least cause.

✓ When I shop, I don't make a list because.

The verb 'shopping' is incorrectly used without an auxiliary verb. The correct form is 'When I shop' to indicate habitual action. Also, 'at least cause' seems to be a mishearing or typo for 'a list.' Use 'make a list' instead.

× Oh, I prefer a finding closes travel race or another.

✓ Oh, I prefer finding clothes, travel, race, or others.

The phrase is unclear and contains incorrect word forms and prepositions. 'A finding' should be 'finding' without 'a.' 'Closes' should be 'clothes.' 'Travel race' is unclear but likely intended as 'travel' or 'traveling.' 'Or another' should be 'or others.'

× I don't need to UM at least because my memory is very good then others.

✓ I don't need to make a list because my memory is better than others'.

'At least' is incorrect; it should be 'a list.' Also, 'very good then others' should be 'better than others.' The phrase 'make a list' is the correct collocation.

× Honestly I I'm not working now 'cause I'm a student and.

✓ Honestly, I'm not working now because I'm a student.

The sentence has redundant pronouns 'I I'm' and an incomplete conjunction 'and.' Removing redundancy and completing the sentence improves clarity.

× Our I'm graduated 8 agreed and now I'm nine grade.

✓ I graduated from 8th grade and now I'm in 9th grade.

'Our I'm graduated' is incorrect; 'I graduated' is correct past tense. '8 agreed' should be '8th grade.' 'Nine grade' should be '9th grade.'

× Sing Some people like making lists because they're memory is a little bit bad in my opinion.

✓ Some people like making lists because their memory is a little bit bad, in my opinion.

'They're' is a contraction of 'they are,' but the possessive pronoun 'their' is needed to indicate possession of memory.

× They made a list because they don't say.

✓ They make a list because they don't remember.

'Made' is past tense, but the context suggests habitual action, so present tense 'make' is appropriate. 'Don't say' is incorrect; likely intended 'don't remember.'

× They don't have memorable.

✓ They don't have a good memory.

'Memorable' is an adjective; the noun 'memory' is needed here. Also, 'have a good memory' is the correct expression.

× Usually I'm not making at least on paper or a phone, but I I do I make a list on paper up some passwords from my from my Gmail or telegram maybe, but on my phone I don't make.

✓ Usually, I don't make a list on paper or phone, but I do make a list on paper for some passwords from my Gmail or Telegram, maybe. But on my phone, I don't make lists.

'I'm not making at least' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't make a list.' The sentence is run-on and unclear; breaking it into clearer parts and correcting verb forms improves comprehension.