列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer needs to be clearer and more grammatically correct. Try to start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise.

示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list the night before because it helps me remember everything I need to buy and saves time at the store.

建议: Your answer is unclear and lacks structure. Begin with a direct response, then explain with specific details using linking words. Use correct grammar and vocabulary related to your work.

示例: Yes, I make lists for my work because I handle a lot of data that frequently changes. This helps me keep track of updates and tasks efficiently.

建议: Your answer is difficult to understand due to grammar and unclear ideas. Try to express your opinion clearly with reasons and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

示例: I think some people dislike making lists because it can feel stressful to see many tasks at once, which might make them feel overwhelmed.

建议: Your answer is somewhat clear but needs better grammar and sentence structure. Start with a clear preference, then explain why using linking words and specific details.

示例: I prefer making lists in a small notebook because it's easy to review and I can mark tasks as finished or unfinished, which helps me stay organized.

× I usually make a list with night go to shop because it's really helpful to me too.

✓ I usually make a list when going shopping at night because it's really helpful to me too.

The phrase 'with night go to shop' is incorrect. The correct form is to use the gerund '-ing' form after 'when' to indicate the time of the action, so 'when going shopping at night' is appropriate.

× Avoid to forget something too.

✓ It helps me avoid forgetting something too.

The phrase 'Avoid to forget' is incorrect because 'avoid' should be followed by a gerund, not an infinitive. So, 'avoid forgetting' is correct.

× I had to buy.

✓ I have to buy things.

The sentence 'I had to buy' is incomplete and uses past tense incorrectly here. Since the context is habitual action, present tense 'have to buy' is appropriate, and the object should be specified.

× For work I'm doing name list.

✓ For work, I'm making a name list.

The phrase 'doing name list' is incorrect. The verb 'make' or 'create' is used with 'list', and a comma after 'For work' improves clarity.

× Because I'm working on a data for a data there is a lot of thing to do.

✓ Because I'm working on data, there are a lot of things to do.

'Data' is an uncountable noun and should not have an article 'a'. Also, 'thing' should be plural 'things' to agree with 'a lot of'.

× As update and change in lot of things so.

✓ There are updates and changes in a lot of things, so...

The original sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. A proper subject and verb are needed, and 'a lot of' requires an article before 'lot'.

× Iquest making a list might be.

✓ I guess making a list might be stressful.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'I guess' is the correct phrase, and the sentence needs a complement to complete the thought.

× Stressful are the principles are I guess so, because when they see that there's a lot of things to do, then it's difficult to.

✓ I guess making a list is stressful for some people because when they see that there are a lot of things to do, it becomes difficult.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and redundant phrases. 'Stressful' should describe 'making a list', and 'principles' is incorrect here. Also, 'there's' should be 'there are' for plural 'things'.

× I prefer it nickel list on my.

✓ I prefer to keep a list in my small notebook.

The phrase 'it nickel list on my' is unclear and incorrect. The pronoun 'it' is unnecessary, and 'nickel list' seems to be a mishearing or typo. The intended meaning is better expressed as 'keep a list in my small notebook'.

× Small notebook then.

✓ I use a small notebook for that.

The phrase is a fragment and needs to be a complete sentence to convey the idea clearly.

× Because it's easy to look at back then.

✓ Because it's easy to look back at it then.

The phrase 'look at back then' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'look back at it'.

× It's more easy for me.

✓ It's easier for me.

'More easy' is incorrect; the comparative form of 'easy' is 'easier'.