列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，建议练习基本句型结构，确保句子完整且语法正确。同时，回答应更自然流畅，避免断断续续。

示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I often forget what to buy. Making a list helps me remember everything I need and saves time.

建议: 回答中存在语法和表达不连贯的问题，建议使用完整句子并合理连接句子，使表达更清晰。同时，增加具体细节以丰富内容。

示例: Yes, I make lists for my work because I have many deadlines at university. Making lists helps me organize my tasks and submit my work on time.

建议: 回答语法错误严重，表达不清晰。建议学习如何用完整句子表达原因，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it hard to complete all the tasks, so they feel it's not effective for them.

建议: 回答较为简单且有语法错误，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意句子结构的完整性。

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, so it's easier to check my list anytime.

× Are usually make a list when I was sharp cals.

✓ I usually make a list when I go shopping.

句子中使用了错误的时态和结构，'Are usually make'不符合英语语法，应该使用一般现在时'I usually make'，并且'sharp cals'应为'shopping'。建议使用正确的时态和词汇表达。

× Lots of time I. Julie forgot what should I buy in the shop so it is a good way to list.

✓ Many times I just forgot what I should buy in the shop, so it is a good way to make a list.

句子中'time I. Julie'结构不正确，且时态混乱。应使用过去时态表达过去经常发生的事情，'forgot'正确，但句子结构需调整，'should I buy'应改为'I should buy'。

× There are lots of deadlines when I was. In the university, so it is helpful to make a list.

✓ There were lots of deadlines when I was in university, so it was helpful to make a list.

句子中描述过去的情况，应使用过去时态，'are'应改为'were'，'is'应改为'was'，'in the university'中'the'可省略。

× I think it it does work a lot.

✓ I think it works a lot.

主语是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，'does work'在此句中不自然，应改为'works'。

× Which helped me to submit my work.

✓ It helped me to submit my work.

句子缺少主语，且时态应为过去时，'Which'用法不当，应改为'It'。

× I think the reason people don't like making the list.

✓ I think the reason people don't like making lists is that...

句子结构不完整，缺少谓语部分，需补充完整句子。

× Be 'cause they cannot. Achieved achieve them and it not working for these people, so that's the reason I think they don't like.

✓ Because they cannot achieve them and it does not work for these people, so that's the reason I think they don't like it.

'Be 'cause'应为'because'，句子中断裂且动词形式错误，'achieved achieve'重复且错误，缺少主语和谓语，需调整句子结构和动词形式。

× I think the reason people don't like making the list.

✓ I think the reason people don't like making lists.

'the list'不合适，泛指时应使用复数形式'lists'，去掉定冠词。

× So which is easier for me to follow the list?

✓ So it is easier for me to follow the list.

'which'用法错误，指代不明确，应使用'it'指代前文提到的方式。