列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by making it more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as repeating 'when you shop' and 'before I go to the shopping'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct grammar mistakes like 'makes me organize' to 'helps me stay organized'.

示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me focus on what I need to buy. For example, if I need detergent, I can quickly find it without wasting time. This way, I save time and stay organized.

建议: Your answer needs clearer structure and grammar correction. Instead of 'stays me organize', say 'helps me stay organized'. Also, explain how the list helps with time management more clearly. Use linking words like 'for example' properly and avoid awkward phrases like 'I use out an app'.

示例: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me stay organized and manage my time effectively. For example, if I have a meeting, my app reminds me so I don't forget. I also use an app to track my daily tasks.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammar errors. Try to express the idea that some people prefer to act immediately rather than spend time making lists. Use simple and correct sentences with linking words to explain your point clearly.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to do things immediately instead of spending time writing. For example, if they need detergent, they just remember it and buy it without a list.

建议: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer expression and grammar correction. Use correct tense ('I prefer' instead of 'I preferred'), and avoid repetition ('in in'). Explain why the phone is handy with linking words. Also, correct phrases like 'what are the least to be done' to 'what tasks need to be done'.

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone rather than on paper because my phone is handy and I can carry it anywhere. Also, the apps on my phone remind me of tasks I need to complete. For example, if I have a meeting, the app will remind me to prepare in advance.

× I just really do it before I go to the shopping.

✓ I just really do it before I go shopping.

The phrase 'go to the shopping' is incorrect because 'shopping' is an uncountable noun here and does not require the definite article 'the' or the preposition 'to'. The correct expression is 'go shopping'. This is a common error with activities expressed as gerunds.

× For example, if I want to buy a detergent immediately, I will go to buy detergent.

✓ For example, if I want to buy detergent immediately, I will go to buy detergent.

The word 'detergent' is an uncountable noun in this context, so it should not be preceded by the indefinite article 'a'. Using 'a detergent' is incorrect because it implies a countable item, which is not the case here.

× Yes, I make a list in my work as it stays me organize and manage my time management.

✓ Yes, I make a list at work as it helps me stay organized and manage my time.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to 'work' in this context; 'at work' is the correct phrase. Also, 'stays me organize' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'helps me stay organized'. Additionally, 'manage my time management' is redundant; 'manage my time' suffices.

× Some people's not making less because they rather work immediately rather than to sit to use that.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to work immediately rather than sit and use them.

The phrase 'Some people's not making less' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. It should be 'Some people don't like making lists'. Also, 'they rather work' should be 'they prefer to work'. The phrase 'rather than to sit to use that' is awkward; it should be 'rather than sit and use them', with 'them' referring to lists.

× I'm writing the list in their place.

✓ They write the list in their own way.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'I'm writing the list in their place' does not make sense. The intended meaning seems to be that people write lists in their own way, so the correction reflects that.

× No need for there for using the list.

✓ There is no need to use a list.

The phrase 'No need for there for using the list' is ungrammatical and confusing. The correct expression is 'There is no need to use a list', which clearly conveys the intended meaning.

× I preferred to make a list in in my phone rather than in the paper wybie cause phone is handy.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because the phone is handy.

The verb 'preferred' is past tense, but the context requires present tense 'prefer'. Also, 'in in my phone' is a typo and should be 'on my phone'. 'In the paper' should be 'on paper'. 'Wybie cause' is a misspelling of 'because'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Then there's an app in the phone that it gives me reminder what are the least to be done.

✓ Then there's an app on the phone that gives me reminders of the tasks to be done.

The preposition 'in the phone' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on the phone'. Also, 'it gives me reminder what are the least to be done' is ungrammatical; it should be 'gives me reminders of the tasks to be done'.

× For example if I have a meeting it will gives a reminder that I need to do to prepare something.

✓ For example, if I have a meeting, it will give a reminder that I need to prepare something.

The verb 'gives' does not agree with the singular subject 'it will'; the correct form is 'it will give'. Also, 'that I need to do to prepare something' is awkward; simplifying to 'that I need to prepare something' is clearer and grammatically correct.