列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Старайтесь использовать более связные и грамматически правильные предложения. Например, избегайте ошибок с временами и добавляйте связующие слова для плавности речи.

示例: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I prefer to memorize what I need. Also, I don't have time to write it down, and I believe I have a good memory.

建议: Используйте полные и грамматически правильные предложения, а также объясняйте свои ответы более подробно, чтобы сделать речь более естественной.

示例: No, I don't make lists for my work because I find them ineffective. Instead, I prefer to keep tasks in my mind.

建议: Старайтесь строить предложения более связно и использовать подходящие слова для выражения своих мыслей. Добавляйте объяснения и примеры.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because everyone has different ideas and ways of organizing. Personally, I don't like to make plans all at once.

建议: Обратите внимание на грамматику и структуру предложений. Используйте связующие слова для логичности и избегайте повторений.

示例: I prefer to write my lists on my phone because I might lose paper lists. Once, I forgot my list at home when I went to the supermarket, and I felt very embarrassed.

× I don't have a time to write this.

✓ I don't have time to write this.

The word 'time' is an uncountable noun and should not be preceded by the indefinite article 'a'. The correct phrase is 'have time' without 'a'.

× I had I have a good memory.

✓ I have a good memory.

The phrase 'I had I have' is incorrect and redundant. The correct sentence should use the present tense 'I have' to express a current ability.

× I don't like make a list for work and it doesn't work.

✓ I don't like to make a list for work and it doesn't work.

The verb 'like' is usually followed by the infinitive form 'to make' rather than the bare infinitive 'make' in this context.

× Because all people have a different. Ideas.

✓ Because all people have different ideas.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before the plural noun 'ideas'. Also, the period after 'different' is incorrect. The adjective 'different' should directly modify the plural noun 'ideas' without an article.

× Personally I don't like to make plan at once.

✓ Personally, I don't like to make a plan at once.

The noun 'plan' is countable and requires the indefinite article 'a' when singular.

× I prefer to write it down in my phone becauses I can lose it.

✓ I prefer to write it down on my phone because I can lose it.

The correct preposition to use with 'phone' in this context is 'on' rather than 'in'. Also, 'becauses' is a typo and should be 'because'.

× Once it happened when I went to the supermarket.

✓ Once it happened when I went to the supermarket.

This sentence is correct in past tense and needs no correction.

× I don't have this list in my pocket and I was very embarrassed it in this situation.

✓ I didn't have this list in my pocket and I was very embarrassed in this situation.

The verb tense should be past ('didn't have') to match the past context. The pronoun 'it' is unnecessary and incorrect after 'embarrassed'. The correct phrase is 'embarrassed in this situation'.