列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas. Also, improve grammar by using correct verb forms and articles. For example, say "I make a list when I go shopping to ensure I don't forget anything important."

示例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping to make sure I don't forget any important items. This helps me shop efficiently and saves time.

建议: Focus on giving a clear and complete answer. Avoid hesitations and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, "I don't make lists at work because I am a cashier and need to serve customers quickly."

示例: No, I don't make lists for my work because I work as a cashier in a supermarket, and I need to attend to customers quickly without time to prepare lists.

建议: Improve clarity and grammar. Use specific reasons and link your ideas. For example, "Some people dislike making lists because they find writing tedious or prefer to remember things mentally. However, I think making lists is helpful."

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they find writing boring or prefer to rely on memory. However, I believe lists help organize tasks better.

建议: Try to speak clearly and organize your answer logically. Use correct vocabulary and grammar. For example, "I prefer making lists on paper because phones can run out of battery, and paper is more reliable."

示例: I prefer to make lists on paper since phones might lose battery, and paper lists are easier to access anytime.

× Actually I do make a list when I go to shop so I can bring everything that I need without missing something or forgets to bring important thing that I may use.

✓ Actually I do make a list when I go shopping so I can bring everything that I need without missing anything or forgetting to bring important things that I may use.

The phrase 'go to shop' should be 'go shopping' to correctly express the activity. 'Something' should be 'anything' in negative contexts. 'Forgets' is incorrect because the subject is 'I', so it should be 'forgetting' to match the gerund form after 'or'. 'Important thing' should be plural 'important things' because it refers to multiple items.

× Actually I do make a list when I go to shop so I can bring everything that I need without missing something or forgets to bring important thing that I may use.

✓ Actually I do make a list when I go shopping so I can bring everything that I need without missing anything or forgetting to bring important things that I may use.

The verb 'forgets' is incorrectly used in present tense with 'I' as subject; it should be 'forgetting' to maintain parallel structure with 'missing' and to fit the gerund form after 'or'.

× I work at a cashier in. Supermarket so when the customer come I don't have time to make a list and I should work quickly for.

✓ I work as a cashier in a supermarket, so when customers come, I don't have time to make a list and I have to work quickly.

The phrase 'work at a cashier' is incorrect; it should be 'work as a cashier'. 'Supermarket' needs an article 'a'. 'The customer come' should be 'customers come' to agree in number and tense. 'I should work quickly for' is incomplete and should be 'I have to work quickly' to express necessity.

× I work at a cashier in. Supermarket so when the customer come I don't have time to make a list and I should work quickly for.

✓ I work as a cashier in a supermarket, so when customers come, I don't have time to make a list and I have to work quickly.

'The customer come' is incorrect because 'customer' is singular but the verb 'come' is plural; it should be 'customers come' to match plural subject and verb agreement.

× Maybe because they don't like to write our or they don't like to make her list.

✓ Maybe because they don't like to write out or they don't like to make their list.

'Write our' is incorrect; it should be 'write out' meaning to write something down. 'Her list' is incorrect pronoun usage; it should be 'their list' to agree with the plural subject 'they'.

× Maybe because they don't like to write our or they don't like to make her list.

✓ Maybe because they don't like to write out or they don't like to make their list.

The pronoun 'her' does not agree with the plural subject 'they'; 'their' is the correct possessive pronoun here.

× But I prefer. For people to make a list.

✓ But I prefer people to make a list.

The preposition 'for' is unnecessary and incorrect in this sentence; 'I prefer people to make a list' is the correct structure.

× Then she listens. Actually the fall that question I like to make list at paper becauses better than the phone because maybe I lose the battery.

✓ Then she listens. Actually, for that question, I like to make a list on paper because it's better than the phone since I might lose the battery.

'Fall that question' is incorrect; it should be 'for that question'. 'Make list at paper' should be 'make a list on paper' because 'on' is the correct preposition for surfaces. 'Becauses' is a misspelling of 'because'. 'Maybe I lose the battery' should be 'I might lose the battery' to express possibility.

× And I don't have a chart and I can't read the list that I eat it.

✓ And I don't have a charger and I can't read the list that I wrote.

'Chart' is incorrect; it should be 'charger'. 'The list that I eat it' is incorrect; it should be 'the list that I wrote' or 'the list that I have' to make sense.