列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答较为简单，缺少连贯性和具体细节。建议在回答中使用连接词，并补充更多具体原因或例子，使回答更自然流畅。

示例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need. For example, last week I bought all the ingredients for a cake without forgetting anything.

建议: 回答结构清晰，但可以使用连接词使句子更连贯，同时增加具体细节来丰富内容。

示例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me remember important tasks. As a result, I can manage my time better and complete my projects efficiently.

建议: 语法和表达存在错误，句子不够自然。建议改进语法，使用更准确的表达，并增加连接词和具体细节。

示例: I think some people don't like making lists because they feel stressed and unmotivated when they see many tasks that are hard to finish.

建议: 回答较为简单，缺少连贯性和具体细节。建议使用连接词，并补充更多具体原因或例子，使回答更自然流畅。

示例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because most people use digital devices nowadays. Therefore, it's more convenient for me to check and update my list anytime and anywhere.

× Yes, I will make a list when I shop because I want to make sure I bought all the things I need.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop because I want to make sure I buy all the things I need.

这里时态使用不正确。题目问的是习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时，而不是将来时“will”。另外，后半句中“bought”是过去式，应该用一般现在时“buy”，因为是指通常需要的东西。建议将句子改为一般现在时，表达习惯性动作。

× I think many people will feel stressful and less active when they find the it's hard for them to finish all the listed things.

✓ I think many people will feel stressed and less active when they find it's hard for them to finish all the listed things.

“stressful”是形容词，表示“令人感到压力的”，而这里应表达“感到有压力”，应使用过去分词“stressed”作表语。此外，句中“the it's”多余，应去掉“the”。建议将“stressful”改为“stressed”，并删除多余的“the”。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because many people now use a digital device, so it's more convenient for me to check my list on phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because many people now use digital devices, so it's more convenient for me to check my list on my phone.

“on phone”缺少冠词，应为“on my phone”。另外，“a digital device”应改为复数“digital devices”，因为泛指多种设备。建议补充冠词并调整单复数形式。