列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer needs to be clearer and more structured. Start with a direct response, then explain why you make a list. Avoid grammatical errors and redundancy. Use linking words like 'because' to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because there are many items to buy, and I often forget some of them. Making a list helps me remember everything and saves time.

建议: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Respond directly to the question, then explain how making lists helps you with your work or studies. Use linking words and specific examples to clarify your point.

示例: Yes, I often make lists for my studies, which help me organise my tasks. For example, I list my upcoming assignments and deadlines to manage my time effectively.

建议: Your answer should be more structured and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain reasons why some people avoid making lists. Use linking words like 'because' or 'since' and avoid vague phrases.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or they have a good memory and prefer to remember tasks mentally.

建议: Your answer should be more concise and clear. Start with your preference, then explain why. Avoid unnecessary repetition and unclear phrases. Use linking words like 'because' to connect ideas.

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient and easy to carry when I go outside, unlike paper lists which can be lost or damaged.

× Usually I make a list when we I go for his shopping because sometimes they had too much is too much grocery I want to take at the time I forgot something so it's easy for me to make a list.

✓ Usually I make a list when I go shopping because sometimes there is too much grocery I want to buy at one time and I forget something, so it's easy for me to make a list.

The sentence contains incorrect pronouns such as 'we I' and 'his shopping' which confuse the meaning. Also, 'they had too much is too much grocery' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. Correct pronouns and clearer phrasing improve understanding.

× Usually I make a list when we I go for his shopping because sometimes they had too much is too much grocery I want to take at the time I forgot something so it's easy for me to make a list.

✓ Usually I make a list when I go shopping because sometimes there is too much grocery I want to buy at one time and I forget something, so it's easy for me to make a list.

The phrase 'they had too much is too much grocery' is incorrect. The correct structure uses 'there is' to indicate existence or quantity, e.g., 'there is too much grocery'.

× Is it work? Yes, I make a list too many times when I would move on to work and it's, uh, I need use where I am right now.

✓ Does it work? Yes, I make a list many times when I go to work and I need to use it where I am right now.

The question 'Is it work?' is incorrect; the correct modal verb usage for asking about functionality is 'Does it work?'. Also, 'I need use' should be 'I need to use' to correctly use the modal verb 'need'.

× Yes, I make a list too many times when I would move on to work and it's, uh, I need use where I am right now.

✓ Yes, I make a list many times when I go to work and I need to use it where I am right now.

The phrase 'I would move on to work' is awkward and unclear. Using 'when I go to work' is clearer. Also, 'I need use' lacks the preposition 'to' and the object 'it' is missing, which is necessary for clarity.

× I make a link to for my targets, like for for example, I examples upcoming that at that time I meant the means to what this kind.

✓ I make a list for my targets, for example, upcoming tasks that I mean at that time.

The sentence uses 'link' instead of 'list' and has unclear pronoun references like 'I meant the means to what this kind.' Correcting to 'list' and simplifying the sentence improves clarity and correct pronoun use.

× Well it depends on the people choice. Some peoples are making at least some are not.

✓ Well, it depends on people's choice. Some people make lists, some do not.

'Peoples' is incorrect; the plural of 'people' is 'people' itself. Also, 'making at least' is incorrect; it should be 'make lists' to correctly use the verb with the noun.

× But I believe in believe 2 some people they tend not there. Some people they not making least there are some lazy people or some are they have remember they have a good remembering power, so they cannot make a.

✓ But I believe some people tend not to. Some people do not make lists; some are lazy, and some have good memory, so they do not need to make lists.

The sentence has multiple pronoun errors and unclear phrasing such as 'believe in believe 2' and 'they not making least.' Correcting pronouns and restructuring the sentence clarifies the meaning.

× Usually I prefer both, but in the modern Asian Arab era we have, we have, we have. If we go outside, then I have a phone. Phone I mean, so it's better then do make a list on phone rather than the paper.

✓ Usually I prefer both, but in the modern Asian Arab era, if we go outside, I have a phone. So it's better to make a list on the phone rather than on paper.

The sentence has redundant phrases and incorrect pronoun use like 'then do make a list on phone.' Correcting to 'it's better to make a list on the phone' and removing redundancy improves grammar and clarity.