列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: คำตอบของคุณควรชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น โดยควรตอบตรงคำถามและใช้ประโยคที่สั้นและกระชับ หลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำซ้ำและคำที่ไม่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'bite' ควรเป็น 'buy' และควรใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิดให้ลื่นไหลมากขึ้น

示例: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I prefer to browse all the aisles and decide what I need as I go. This way, I can be flexible and choose items based on what I feel is necessary at the moment.

建议: คำตอบควรมีโครงสร้างที่ชัดเจนและใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อให้ประโยคสมบูรณ์และเข้าใจง่าย ควรแก้ไขไวยากรณ์และใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม เช่น 'have to do' แทน 'have to done' และเพิ่มรายละเอียดเพื่ออธิบายว่าทำไมการทำรายการช่วยได้

示例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me prioritize important tasks. It works well since I can focus on completing urgent jobs first before moving on to less important ones.

建议: คำตอบไม่ชัดเจนและมีความสับสน ควรตอบตรงประเด็นและใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์ พร้อมคำอธิบายที่ชัดเจนและใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล ควรหลีกเลี่ยงคำที่ไม่เกี่ยวข้องและแก้ไขไวยากรณ์

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it's unnecessary. They prefer to remember things on their own and think flexibly rather than being restricted by a fixed list.

建议: คำตอบควรชัดเจนและมีโครงสร้างที่ดี ใช้คำเชื่อมและแก้ไขไวยากรณ์ เช่น 'my phone is always with me' แทน 'phone are my phone is like is with me all the time' และหลีกเลี่ยงคำที่ไม่จำเป็น

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is portable and always with me. This way, I don't need to carry paper, and I am less likely to forget my list.

× I will walk through every corner and I will think by myself like where which of the things that is necessary and I will bite it by myself.

✓ I will walk through every corner and think to myself about which things are necessary and I will decide by myself.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'think by myself like where which of the things that is necessary' which is awkward and ungrammatical. The verb 'think' should be followed by 'to myself' and the clause should be restructured for clarity. Also, 'bite it by myself' is incorrect; likely the intended meaning is 'decide by myself'. The correction improves verb usage and sentence clarity.

× So I don't think I I not person who would like to make a list.

✓ So I don't think I am the person who would like to make a list.

The original sentence is missing the verb 'am' after 'I' and has a double 'I'. The pronoun 'I' requires a linking verb 'am' to form a correct sentence. The correction adds the verb and removes redundancy.

× I have to prioritize the things that I have to done before or doing other things that less important.

✓ I have to prioritize the things that I have to do before doing other things that are less important.

The phrase 'have to done' is incorrect; it should be 'have to do' because 'have to' is followed by the base form of the verb. Also, 'doing other things that less important' lacks the verb 'are' before 'less important'. The correction fixes verb form and adds the missing verb for grammatical correctness.

× So I will make a list for my work an does it work?

✓ So I will make a list for my work. Does it work?

The original sentence incorrectly combines two sentences without proper punctuation and uses 'an' instead of 'and'. The correction separates the sentences and corrects the conjunction usage.

× I think it works for me because I will do things that I have to do before do things that.

✓ I think it works for me because I will do the things I have to do before doing other things.

The original sentence ends abruptly and uses 'do things that' without completion. The correction completes the sentence and uses the gerund 'doing' to indicate the sequence of actions properly.

× Well in my opinion anything does the P Why people don't like making lists is because the things that is not necessary for them to make list.

✓ Well, in my opinion, the reason why people don't like making lists is because the things are not necessary for them to make a list.

The original sentence contains unclear and incorrect pronoun usage such as 'anything does the P' which seems to be a transcription error. Also, 'the things that is' should be 'the things that are' to agree in number. The correction clarifies the sentence and corrects pronoun and verb agreement.

× Like you can rethink by yourself and not freeze it as sometimes.

✓ Like you can rethink by yourself and not freeze it sometimes.

The phrase 'not freeze it as sometimes' is awkward and ungrammatical. Removing 'as' improves the sentence flow and correctness.

× Is quite care tree falling too? Then.

✓ It is quite careless to freeze your thoughts too, then.

The original sentence is unclear and seems to be a transcription error. Assuming the intended meaning, the correction provides a grammatically correct sentence with proper pronoun and verb usage.

× Not in my opinion.

✓ Not in my opinion.

This phrase is incomplete and unclear. It may be better expressed as 'In my opinion, no.' However, since it does not contain a clear grammatical error from the list, no correction is applied.

× I prefer to make a list by my phone because it's portable and phone are my phone is like is with me all the time.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's portable and my phone is always with me.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'phone are' which is plural with singular subject and has redundant phrases. The correction fixes singular/plural agreement and improves sentence clarity.

× I don't have to bring any paper or any books with me at that time and I think I will not forget my phone at.

✓ I don't have to bring any paper or books with me, and I think I will not forget my phone.

The phrase 'at that time' is unnecessary and 'forget my phone at' is incomplete. The correction removes unnecessary prepositions and completes the sentence properly.