列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: In English (Cambodia), try to use clearer and more accurate vocabulary and grammar. For example, instead of 'sharpen up' say 'go shopping'. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words like 'because' to connect ideas logically.

示例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need to buy. For example, last week I made a list and I didn't forget anything. This way, I don't have to wander around the market.

建议: In English (Cambodia), focus on clearer sentence structure and correct word choice. For example, use 'organize the tasks' instead of 'arrange a what thing'. Also, avoid filler words like 'um' and use linking words such as 'because' to explain reasons clearly.

示例: Yes, I always make a list for my work and it works every time because when you make a list, you can organize the tasks you need to do. Also, it helps save time and prevents forgetting anything.

建议: In English (Cambodia), try to express ideas more clearly and avoid confusing phrases. For example, instead of 'it cannot sell for time file' say 'it does not save time'. Use linking words like 'because' to explain reasons logically and avoid repetition.

示例: I think some people don't like making lists because it is not part of their routine. For example, my friend doesn't like making lists because she thinks it is not effective and does not save time since she cannot follow the list.

建议: In English (Cambodia), improve grammar and word choice. For example, say 'using my phone helps me remember things better' instead of 'have me remember'. Use linking words like 'because' to explain reasons clearly and avoid small errors.

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, so it is very convenient. Also, using my phone helps me remember things better since I can set reminders and alarms. That's why I don't forget important tasks and can change my list anytime.

× It had me remember everything I need to buy an I don't have to wonder around and market.

✓ It helps me remember everything I need to buy and I don't have to wander around the market.

The phrase 'It had me remember' is incorrect because 'had' is the past tense of 'have' and does not fit here. The correct verb is 'helps' in present tense to match the context. Also, 'wonder' should be 'wander' meaning to walk around aimlessly, and 'market' needs the definite article 'the'.

× For example, all last week I want shopping and uh make a list for myself and I'm not get forgetting anything.

✓ For example, all last week I went shopping and made a list for myself and I didn't forget anything.

The verb 'want' is incorrect; it should be 'went' as the past tense of 'go'. 'Make' should be 'made' to match past tense. 'I'm not get forgetting' is incorrect; it should be 'I didn't forget' to express past negative.

× I'm praying.

✓ I'm trying.

'I'm praying' is incorrect in this context; likely the speaker meant 'I'm trying' to indicate effort. 'Praying' means to pray, which does not fit here.

× Yes I do. I always make a list for my work and it worked every time honestly because UM whenever you make a list for yourself you can arrange a what thing that you need to be done and also it can self all your time from without forgetting anything.

✓ Yes I do. I always make a list for my work and it works every time honestly because whenever you make a list for yourself you can arrange what things you need to get done and also it can save all your time without forgetting anything.

'It worked every time' should be 'it works every time' to indicate habitual action. 'Arrange a what thing' is incorrect; it should be 'arrange what things'. 'Can self all your time' is incorrect; it should be 'can save all your time'. 'From without forgetting anything' is incorrect; 'without forgetting anything' is correct.

× I also have a friend who doesn't like to make a list for itself because she think that it uh, it is not really effective and it cannot sell for time file which because she cannot do anything according to that list.

✓ I also have a friend who doesn't like to make a list for herself because she thinks that it is not really effective and it cannot save time because she cannot do anything according to that list.

The pronoun 'itself' is incorrect for a person; 'herself' is correct. 'She think' should be 'she thinks' for subject-verb agreement. 'Sell for time file which because' is incorrect; it should be 'save time because'.

× I prefer making alerts on my phone because I always carry it with me so it's very convenient.

✓ I prefer making alerts on my phone because I always carry it with me, so it's very convenient.

This sentence is mostly correct; a comma is added before 'so' for clarity. No major grammar issue here.

× Also using my phone have me remember things better since we can start a reminders and alarms.

✓ Also, using my phone helps me remember things better since I can set reminders and alarms.

'Using my phone have me remember' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me remember'. 'We can start a reminders' is incorrect; it should be 'I can set reminders'.

× That's why I don't forget important task and can change my list anytime.

✓ That's why I don't forget important tasks and can change my list anytime.

'Important task' should be plural 'important tasks' to match the context of multiple tasks.